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Array ( [sid] => 93945 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => in just one spontaneous night [time] => 2005-05-10 19:30:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Just to complicate matters even more

I’m sure you will come back again

Just to make this wound sore

I’m positive you will return

Only to push me to the limit

Will you arrive and steal the light

When you’re ready to take what I was given

Then you will put up your best fight

When you see that I have been beaten

Then will you offer a helping hand

When you know I can’t take it anymore

When you’re sure you’re in command

At the moment that I need you

You will suddenly appear

At the precise time I loath you

Will you suddenly be without fear

And upon impact you will make your mark

You will speak words curt and concise

You will change what I have built

In just one spontaneous night
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in just one spontaneous night

Contributed by jyssvw on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:30:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Just to complicate matters even more

I’m sure you will come back again

Just to make this wound sore

I’m positive you will return

Only to push me to the limit

Will you arrive and steal the light

When you’re ready to take what I was given

Then you will put up your best fight

When you see that I have been beaten

Then will you offer a helping hand

When you know I can’t take it anymore

When you’re sure you’re in command

At the moment that I need you

You will suddenly appear

At the precise time I loath you

Will you suddenly be without fear

And upon impact you will make your mark

You will speak words curt and concise

You will change what I have built

In just one spontaneous night

Copyright Â© jyssvw ... [ 2005-05-10 19:30:41]
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Re: in just one spontaneous night (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:57:34 PM AEST
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i really love this poem. the emotion that is portrayed through the words is excellent. i can feel through reading the poem, exactly what u were feeling when writing it. i know what it's like to have someone there constantly that u either love or hate but can't get over because they are constantly around.
great write!!
unforgiven

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