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Looks like they sunk again
The midnight train signaling
Look like I’m gone again

The next stop Tuscan
The desert comes within view
I got them dry heat blues again
A sand castle for a home

Down comes red rain again
The blue sun within reach
The sand glistening
The wind whispering

I got these cool breeze blues
My heart is fluttering
Same emotions again
The first step stuttering

The saxophone notes
In a distance they wail
I got these goose bump blues again
Chasin’ my own lost tail

I can see the green river again
Its current unmistakable
I got the tear drop blues again
Feelin’ down this way

Not much a person can say
The bluest blue of all these rays
I got the blues today
Feelin’ down this way
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Goose Bump Blues

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:18:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I got the low down blues
Looks like they sunk again
The midnight train signaling
Look like I’m gone again

The next stop Tuscan
The desert comes within view
I got them dry heat blues again
A sand castle for a home

Down comes red rain again
The blue sun within reach
The sand glistening
The wind whispering

I got these cool breeze blues
My heart is fluttering
Same emotions again
The first step stuttering

The saxophone notes
In a distance they wail
I got these goose bump blues again
Chasin’ my own lost tail

I can see the green river again
Its current unmistakable
I got the tear drop blues again
Feelin’ down this way

Not much a person can say
The bluest blue of all these rays
I got the blues today
Feelin’ down this way

Copyright Â© jyssvw22 ... [ 2005-05-10 19:18:18]
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Re: Goose Bump Blues (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:26:59 PM AEST
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chills...felt like i was there..
brighter days ahead..Awesome poem
Keep up the Great writes
~~~Michelle~~~

Re: Goose Bump Blues (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:50:14 PM AEST
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This actually sounds like song lyrics. Colorful ones at that. You could sing this on Beale Street in Memphis and be a hit! As a song, I like it.

Dove

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