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Array ( [sid] => 93941 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Hurts [time] => 2005-05-10 18:33:39 [hometext] => this is a poem about a friend. i hope she'll be okay. [bodytext] => Bleeding and hurting,
Loving and caring,
What do you do when a person you love,
Won't stop imparing?

Knocked unconcious,
Alone in her room,
Eerily quiet,
In her own private womb,

The person who hurt her,
Now stands over her form,
Not always this way,
But never to reform,

Her arm is now bleeding,
Her head has been gashed,
Yet she hurts deep inside,
Her dreams have been dashed,

In her head she hears screaming,
Maybe it's her own,
The voice she hears is telling her,
to run away and not come home,

She knows it can't happen like that,
Even if she's not okay,
The cuts that were left in her leg say so,
"Don't tell, You'll pay." [comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 55 [informant] => crimson_regret420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

She Hurts

Contributed by crimson_regret420 on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:33:39 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Bleeding and hurting,
Loving and caring,
What do you do when a person you love,
Won't stop imparing?

Knocked unconcious,
Alone in her room,
Eerily quiet,
In her own private womb,

The person who hurt her,
Now stands over her form,
Not always this way,
But never to reform,

Her arm is now bleeding,
Her head has been gashed,
Yet she hurts deep inside,
Her dreams have been dashed,

In her head she hears screaming,
Maybe it's her own,
The voice she hears is telling her,
to run away and not come home,

She knows it can't happen like that,
Even if she's not okay,
The cuts that were left in her leg say so,
"Don't tell, You'll pay."

Copyright © crimson_regret420 ... [ 2005-05-10 18:33:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: She Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:35:33 PM AEST
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sad

nice write

Re: She Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:18:15 PM AEST
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Lovely writing.....Hope she's ok also...
really sad.. will be in my prayers

~~~Michelle~~~

Re: She Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:46:18 PM AEST
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sad good feeling, nicly written
kc

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