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Array ( [sid] => 93928 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Objects in the Mirror.... [time] => 2005-05-10 16:46:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Woke up this morning.......
And stumbled out of bed.
with a headache and a trifle shiver.

I glanced at the Mirror,
You were there...staring back at me.
Those lovely eyes exploring the depths of my soul.

You were beautiful...an angel standing by my side
Your sweet magic expanding my life,
Into timeless moments.

Those arms wrapped around my torso,
Your short bursts of breath tease my hair,
Your lips so close to mine...

The blanket slips away,
Like an ice cube slowly down your spine.
And you shiver, like its snowfall in the end of may.

The wind rushes in, Blowing apart the windows in its sway,
Letting the summer sun through,
I turn to face you....but somehow you've faded away.

Puzzled expression, I turn back to the mirror,
But theres no sign of the one I held so dear.
Except an Inscription that read...

" Objects in the mirror are closer than they appear ". [comments] => 3 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Mangs [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Objects in the Mirror....

Contributed by Mangs on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 04:46:39 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Woke up this morning.......
And stumbled out of bed.
with a headache and a trifle shiver.

I glanced at the Mirror,
You were there...staring back at me.
Those lovely eyes exploring the depths of my soul.

You were beautiful...an angel standing by my side
Your sweet magic expanding my life,
Into timeless moments.

Those arms wrapped around my torso,
Your short bursts of breath tease my hair,
Your lips so close to mine...

The blanket slips away,
Like an ice cube slowly down your spine.
And you shiver, like its snowfall in the end of may.

The wind rushes in, Blowing apart the windows in its sway,
Letting the summer sun through,
I turn to face you....but somehow you've faded away.

Puzzled expression, I turn back to the mirror,
But theres no sign of the one I held so dear.
Except an Inscription that read...

" Objects in the mirror are closer than they appear ".

Copyright © Mangs ... [ 2005-05-10 16:46:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Objects in the Mirror.... (User Rating: 1 )
by PrincessMew on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 05:26:16 PM AEST
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Awsome poem, I very much enjoyed reading it ^_^

Re: Objects in the Mirror.... (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:29:35 AM AEST
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Hun this is too good for words....the last line is an excellent finish to it. as always u have left me amazed.

love always
ur princess

Re: Objects in the Mirror.... (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:07:49 AM AEST
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I'm speechless. Really I can't even.. this was.. the ending was breathtaking the description was beautiful.. I love this. This may very well be my favorite poem! Please, please keep writing.

--amanda--

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