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Array ( [sid] => 93891 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I wish [time] => 2005-05-10 07:34:38 [hometext] => A poem to make me happy I guess, if you dont like it oh well you read it thank you bye [bodytext] => I wish I was happy,
Not feeling down,
Feeling so Crappy.
I hate it when I barely got a life,
I wish some day I was someones wife.
I wish I wasnt sad,
I think of the fun memories I had.
I hate it when I know I wont be someones wife,
So I can have a better life.
I wish I wasnt alive,
Cause I hate to cry.
Cries of saddness,
Cries of pain,
I cant take any more pain.
I wish I was happy,
Not feeling down,
Or feeling so crappy.
I hate my life,
I wish to say to my guy,
Yes I will be his wife.
Cause my guy is the one,
I will always have fun.
His name is Justin.
A guy I will always put my trust in.
Atleast I do now.
I love you Justin Agbay [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Baby_Grl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

I wish

Contributed by Baby_Grl on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:34:38 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I wish I was happy,
Not feeling down,
Feeling so Crappy.
I hate it when I barely got a life,
I wish some day I was someones wife.
I wish I wasnt sad,
I think of the fun memories I had.
I hate it when I know I wont be someones wife,
So I can have a better life.
I wish I wasnt alive,
Cause I hate to cry.
Cries of saddness,
Cries of pain,
I cant take any more pain.
I wish I was happy,
Not feeling down,
Or feeling so crappy.
I hate my life,
I wish to say to my guy,
Yes I will be his wife.
Cause my guy is the one,
I will always have fun.
His name is Justin.
A guy I will always put my trust in.
Atleast I do now.
I love you Justin Agbay

Copyright © Baby_Grl ... [ 2005-05-10 07:34:38]
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Re: I wish (User Rating: 1 )
by crap_snapper on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 10:55:00 AM AEST
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i quite liked your poem, i don't know why you want to be with someone that bad, i think most people feel like that when there young but it gets easier

Re: I wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 12:18:51 PM AEST
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After having read your journal entry, I have to agree intellectually with crap_snapper. But love is not always an intellectual process. Without the "benefit" of the journal, this poem reads like a true unrequited love poem. and I can relate to that, having been there more than once. I do like your poem and I hope eventually time can heal your hurt and you can move on.

Re: I wish (User Rating: 1 )
by psycopath on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:53:16 PM AEST
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hun i want u to be my wife cause i love u so much

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