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Array ( [sid] => 93888 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When I see you. [time] => 2005-05-10 07:00:22 [hometext] => This is something i just thought of.. [bodytext] => When I see you come in to my room.

I want to run to the bathroom.

Cause I saw you before in my classroom.

I dream once of you begin my bridegroom.

Then I saw you again in my darkroom.

I thought of sweeping you away with my broom.

But I knew that wouldnt work.

When I see you in my storeroom. I Want to run .. And hide in my bathroom..

When I see you in the lunchroom I run..
Then when I see you again... It was in my bedroom.

Then I found out it was someone I saw in the courtroom. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 51 [informant] => Butterflygirl40 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )

When I see you.

Contributed by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:00:22 AM in AEST
Topic: Event

When I see you come in to my room.

I want to run to the bathroom.

Cause I saw you before in my classroom.

I dream once of you begin my bridegroom.

Then I saw you again in my darkroom.

I thought of sweeping you away with my broom.

But I knew that wouldnt work.

When I see you in my storeroom. I Want to run .. And hide in my bathroom..

When I see you in the lunchroom I run..
Then when I see you again... It was in my bedroom.

Then I found out it was someone I saw in the courtroom.

Copyright © Butterflygirl40 ... [ 2005-05-10 07:00:22]
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Re: When I see you. (User Rating: 1 )
by crap_snapper on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:15:32 AM AEST
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when u say it's something u just thought of i wonder how long it took you because i like this poem alot, first one of yours i've read but i'm going to read alot more :)

Re: When I see you. (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:42:57 PM AEST
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:-) nice write dear....lot and lots of rooms in there...butterflies too...

Re: When I see you. (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:31:50 AM AEST
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well written i enjoyed it

Re: When I see you. (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:36:10 AM AEST
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I know this is a nice poem. but i get 35 people to read my poem, and no one else leaves me a comment but 2 people! come on lol if you are going to read my poem. then plzzzzzzzzzz leave me a comment!!!

THANKS BUTTERFLYGIRL40

Re: When I see you. (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:35:16 PM AEST
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Woah... this one is scary to me... very scary. (A person experience I have had) If you have gone through this, I am sorry. No one ought to. Frightening and haunting to mind. Well... great write... it grabbed me right away...
Jodi

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