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You walked out of my life without saying one word.

Y ou never told me bye.

You left my heart broken in to pieces.

I sit and cry .. Cause all I have now is your terrible memories of the dad I never had.

I dont ever think I want to pick up and be reminded of what a terrible memory of you.

I am tearful over the fact that you will never be back in my life.

This pain of you will never go away .. So I gain nothing from this but memories of a dad I never knew.
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The day you left me:(

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:09:07 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The day you left me was one of the saddest day of my life.

You walked out of my life without saying one word.

Y ou never told me bye.

You left my heart broken in to pieces.

I sit and cry .. Cause all I have now is your terrible memories of the dad I never had.

I dont ever think I want to pick up and be reminded of what a terrible memory of you.

I am tearful over the fact that you will never be back in my life.

This pain of you will never go away .. So I gain nothing from this but memories of a dad I never knew.

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2005-05-10 06:09:07]
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Re: The day you left me:( (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:30:23 AM AEST
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This is very sad....really touching...I'm sorry

Jenni

Re: The day you left me:( (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:13:03 AM AEST
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this was a sad write and I'm sorry you've had to live with this pain. I'll never be a man like that and I wish life wasn't this way. take care and I'll try and read more of your writes....Steve

Re: The day you left me:( (User Rating: 1 )
by Sonic_phoenix on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:43:31 AM AEST
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hey
i had two dads walk out on me. i get what your feeling it never really goes away. the feeling that apeice of you is missing. but have hope for even in the darkest there always shines a precious light.
good write
jen

Re: The day you left me:( (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 10:15:30 AM AEST
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This is a sad and heart breaking write. So sorry 4 the pain ur going through.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: The day you left me:( (User Rating: 1 )
by crap_snapper on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 11:00:06 AM AEST
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This poem is ok although i don't think it's one of your best

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