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Array ( [sid] => 93852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Life to Death Transistion. The Reason! [time] => 2005-05-09 20:44:27 [hometext] => The Reason for my Life to Death Transistion [bodytext] => -------________--------------------

Take this for what it's worth
This heart, my smile
Now take this for what it's worth
This love, my smile
Smile

I write to you from hell my love, leaving the foot against the gas
And the wall that must have said your name
Weaken me, for nothing you can say can stop this now
Would a noose replace your lips?
Would a noose replace it?

Can a poem replace a broken heart?
Now can a poem replace broken love?
No
On the beach, I remind myself
That holding hands is so powerless
Tonight, I don't even have the stars
To hold onto

Your picture will remain unbroken, I cry tonight,
"I fall in love"
Wipe each tear away
With sandpaper
Tonight, I'm not alone
And I just wanna get your voice out of my head

A star up in the sky
A Poem to the dead
Let this mistake
Bring a vivid crystal to my eyes
So drain out my lungs
Before the fluid brings a choke
I can not inhale the sparkle of your voice!

I'll bring before, the sight of true unhappiness
whisper i care then gracious enough
I let you go
Remember me for times i've ruined you
not the times i made you smile

Take this blade to my wrist
Help me end what makes me ugly
Swimming in the pools of my mind
You come to me at night
Leave me black and save yourself

Yet i feel no pain
numb to all feeling
Like in winters chill to feel the warmth from this bottle is useless
when I wake up it's gone
when I wake up it all starts again.

I learned to break yesterday.
Destroy tomorrow.
i've watched each leaf fall off my tree.
i've watched the seasons change.

Why? it all starts again
Why step aside when you fall back in place? it all starts again
Why? Why? Why?
Oh misery is so beautiful...

Woke up yesterday with a hole in my chest...
Light up this cigarette
Tonight I will sleep with a gun in my mouth
Good night my love

I die a little more each day
This forced separation
Addiction
Regression

Suspended animation
My life to death Transistion!
This is the reason for the Fixation!!!
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My Life to Death Transistion. The Reason!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 08:44:27 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



-------________--------------------

Take this for what it's worth
This heart, my smile
Now take this for what it's worth
This love, my smile
Smile

I write to you from hell my love, leaving the foot against the gas
And the wall that must have said your name
Weaken me, for nothing you can say can stop this now
Would a noose replace your lips?
Would a noose replace it?

Can a poem replace a broken heart?
Now can a poem replace broken love?
No
On the beach, I remind myself
That holding hands is so powerless
Tonight, I don't even have the stars
To hold onto

Your picture will remain unbroken, I cry tonight,
"I fall in love"
Wipe each tear away
With sandpaper
Tonight, I'm not alone
And I just wanna get your voice out of my head

A star up in the sky
A Poem to the dead
Let this mistake
Bring a vivid crystal to my eyes
So drain out my lungs
Before the fluid brings a choke
I can not inhale the sparkle of your voice!

I'll bring before, the sight of true unhappiness
whisper i care then gracious enough
I let you go
Remember me for times i've ruined you
not the times i made you smile

Take this blade to my wrist
Help me end what makes me ugly
Swimming in the pools of my mind
You come to me at night
Leave me black and save yourself

Yet i feel no pain
numb to all feeling
Like in winters chill to feel the warmth from this bottle is useless
when I wake up it's gone
when I wake up it all starts again.

I learned to break yesterday.
Destroy tomorrow.
i've watched each leaf fall off my tree.
i've watched the seasons change.

Why? it all starts again
Why step aside when you fall back in place? it all starts again
Why? Why? Why?
Oh misery is so beautiful...

Woke up yesterday with a hole in my chest...
Light up this cigarette
Tonight I will sleep with a gun in my mouth
Good night my love

I die a little more each day
This forced separation
Addiction
Regression

Suspended animation
My life to death Transistion!
This is the reason for the Fixation!!!




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Re: My Life to Death Transistion. The Reason! (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:34:21 PM AEST
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i like this one even better than the first... its so hard to put into words what this poem does to me... its like i am in shock from the reality of it, the pain put into it. i totally share your agony.
one day at a time,
jennie*


Re: My Life to Death Transistion. The Reason! (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:31:38 PM AEST
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bravo bravo!! though the sadness reaches out from it nicely written but I hate to see you sad
Michelle




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