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Is where I consummate sin in pain
Until my reflection's shattered
By the loss of what mattered.

Pieces of my nothingness scream
To be woken up from this reality
By breaking each tie at the seam
Of my weathered mentality.

As a dream I'll die another day
With truth leaving me frayed
Until the glass is stained red
From the thorns of my bed
. . .
That are tainted with blood
And stain each petal of love.

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Blood Stained Petals

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 08:10:53 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The bed of thorns where I lay
Is where I consummate sin in pain
Until my reflection's shattered
By the loss of what mattered.

Pieces of my nothingness scream
To be woken up from this reality
By breaking each tie at the seam
Of my weathered mentality.

As a dream I'll die another day
With truth leaving me frayed
Until the glass is stained red
From the thorns of my bed
. . .
That are tainted with blood
And stain each petal of love.

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-05-09 20:10:53]
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Re: Blood Stained Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 08:15:09 PM AEST
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Nice and dark. Just the way the mood strikes me right now. Weathered mentality is a good turn of phrase - worn wisdom. Good work!

Re: Blood Stained Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:04:22 PM AEST
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wow brilliant right which i now congradulate you on a great job. i rilly like this piece of work.
jennie*

Re: Blood Stained Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:09:26 PM AEST
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Very good collabo...! Nice write you two....
Scorp.

Re: Blood Stained Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:21:03 PM AEST
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Essentially 9 huh, had to read this one, yes Essentially 9 is one of respected poets, this was an awesome poem, keep up your good work.

Re: Blood Stained Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:55:28 PM AEST
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Wow this is really an amazing poem....excellent...i absolutely loved it...breathtaking

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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