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Array ( [sid] => 93822 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Imperfections [time] => 2005-05-09 17:43:22 [hometext] => Dedicated to Daphnee Selser, 13 year old tragedy. [bodytext] => I never wanted it to end this way
nor for me to see you on your knees
I feel that all of this
was my fault
but even so
I Miss You
you shot me down
and left me limping
But I'm sorry for existing
If it ruins your reasons for living
I miss you
although I slit you
with my emotions
scarring your perfect life
if you prayed for me to leave
then why am i still standing?
and if I kill you
then why are you still laughing?
but if you hurt me this badly
then why are you the one crying
because I miss you
doesn't mean that I'm not worth it
and because I've died for you
doesn't make it okay
to bring me to life
If i stain you
then why are you so clean?
It's hard to believe
that i'm the one dying
yet your the one lying
to keep up your pride
And It's hard to believe
that I'm not worth having
if your crying
to keep me here
But if I left you now
Would it matter
that I was the one on my knees
would it matter
that I shed the blood
tasted these tears
and I hope that all of this won't follow me down
And If I'm the one killing
then why are they willing
to unleash my blood
and let me fall
if your so perfect
then why are you not
and I hope that all of this won't follow me down
when I fall... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 36 [informant] => MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Imperfections

Contributed by MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 05:43:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I never wanted it to end this way
nor for me to see you on your knees
I feel that all of this
was my fault
but even so
I Miss You
you shot me down
and left me limping
But I'm sorry for existing
If it ruins your reasons for living
I miss you
although I slit you
with my emotions
scarring your perfect life
if you prayed for me to leave
then why am i still standing?
and if I kill you
then why are you still laughing?
but if you hurt me this badly
then why are you the one crying
because I miss you
doesn't mean that I'm not worth it
and because I've died for you
doesn't make it okay
to bring me to life
If i stain you
then why are you so clean?
It's hard to believe
that i'm the one dying
yet your the one lying
to keep up your pride
And It's hard to believe
that I'm not worth having
if your crying
to keep me here
But if I left you now
Would it matter
that I was the one on my knees
would it matter
that I shed the blood
tasted these tears
and I hope that all of this won't follow me down
And If I'm the one killing
then why are they willing
to unleash my blood
and let me fall
if your so perfect
then why are you not
and I hope that all of this won't follow me down
when I fall...




Copyright © MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa ... [ 2005-05-09 17:43:22]
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Re: Imperfections (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:31:23 PM AEST
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Great write! So many questions with few answers keep it cause you are a great writer. The way you put emotion into your writes the way you paint the picture.
Great stuff Keep it up.

keep writing
Keep smiling
Sweetstranger




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