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A special person watches over me, in my heart is where he lies,
Truly fantastic in every single way, one person I could never despise,
My love for him is longingly everlasting something I could never disguise.

Bluebirds brightly begin to chirp a soulful tune in my head,
I always, without a doubt, will mesmerise on all the sweet things that he said,
The daunting depression that used to taunt me lies there defeated, dead,
All because of the path he wisely chose for me, the path I wished to be lead.

Like a blossoming rose my personality has become much more beautiful than before,
Self – inflicted hurt is a thing of the past; suicide is no longer an option anymore,
The mental anguish has vanished automatically now nothing remains painfully sore,
You are now the key to my soul, my reason for flight, I’ll love you now and forevermore.

The spirit of my soul dances elegantly with the doves that flock the sky,
I ponder in dream-like thoughts and visualize what a great future lies ahead for you and I…
… We’ll soar the stars together reach our goals at an ultimate high,
Be wrapped in each other’s luxurious love until the day we die.
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Fates plan

Contributed by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 01:05:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Exquisite sparkly diamonds illuminate the moody midnight skies,
A special person watches over me, in my heart is where he lies,
Truly fantastic in every single way, one person I could never despise,
My love for him is longingly everlasting something I could never disguise.

Bluebirds brightly begin to chirp a soulful tune in my head,
I always, without a doubt, will mesmerise on all the sweet things that he said,
The daunting depression that used to taunt me lies there defeated, dead,
All because of the path he wisely chose for me, the path I wished to be lead.

Like a blossoming rose my personality has become much more beautiful than before,
Self – inflicted hurt is a thing of the past; suicide is no longer an option anymore,
The mental anguish has vanished automatically now nothing remains painfully sore,
You are now the key to my soul, my reason for flight, I’ll love you now and forevermore.

The spirit of my soul dances elegantly with the doves that flock the sky,
I ponder in dream-like thoughts and visualize what a great future lies ahead for you and I…
… We’ll soar the stars together reach our goals at an ultimate high,
Be wrapped in each other’s luxurious love until the day we die.




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Re: Fates plan (User Rating: 1 )
by Kyarn on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 01:08:57 PM AEST
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I love it. Love the imagery and just...good. Fluffy a bit, but good. Happy.


Re: Fates plan (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 01:27:22 PM AEST
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Wonderful... It Touched me...
keep that flame going..
~~~Michelle~~~


Re: Fates plan (User Rating: 1 )
by denno on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 02:40:03 PM AEST
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This is a wondeful poem, I have depression but recently i've met someone who i have fallen madly in love with. It makes such a difference. I just hope it all works out as well as your relationship has. This poem got real close to my heart and really touched me. Love it.


Re: Fates plan (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:26:10 AM AEST
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beautiful and loving, great images in this poem and all of your poetry, your a pleasure to read, hugs n' love nessa

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