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Array ( [sid] => 93788 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angel see my face [time] => 2005-05-09 12:15:51 [hometext] => soak my head in words not said... [bodytext] => This morning's dawn is love not gone,
angels kiss my face
they whisper song, but not too long,
do all applaud disgrace?

soft wings black bring feelings back,
unto my skin of stone
her halo noose brings jugs blood juice,
within i drink my own

their soft black hair caress despair,
head west to hills of grey
soak my head in words not said,
no actors here do play

touch the gown sink deeper down
unto my knees of red
my grip grows weak my sleep does leak
my dreams all died in bed.....

can't i sleep but longer...? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 44 [informant] => In_a_while [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

Angel see my face

Contributed by In_a_while on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:15:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

This morning's dawn is love not gone,
angels kiss my face
they whisper song, but not too long,
do all applaud disgrace?

soft wings black bring feelings back,
unto my skin of stone
her halo noose brings jugs blood juice,
within i drink my own

their soft black hair caress despair,
head west to hills of grey
soak my head in words not said,
no actors here do play

touch the gown sink deeper down
unto my knees of red
my grip grows weak my sleep does leak
my dreams all died in bed.....

can't i sleep but longer...?

Copyright Â© In_a_while ... [ 2005-05-09 12:15:51]
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Re: Angel see my face (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:22:41 PM AEST
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Very well-worded. I enjoyed this...
Scorp.

Re: Angel see my face (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:36:51 PM AEST
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no sleep for you, precious! bwahaha!! okay okay, nevermind me - brilliant wordplay, reminds me of poe. very nice...
~Remy~

Re: Angel see my face (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 02:15:50 PM AEST
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Another great write and it was worded very well with that great style of yours. It had a deep meaning to it that made the reader really get it to the write. Take care and keep up with these great writes so I can read many more. Later for now….Steve

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