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A rather peculiar elder man suddenly appears
He mutters and moans;
then casts some stones
afterward points angrily at me
"You've cursed us all with your bleak outcome,
and now with haste I shall send you home!"
Deep down, dark, into the fiery grasp of eternal damnation for YOU...
Before I could speak, the ground let go of my feet,
and I began my neverending descent into the pits of Hell...
That's where I'll dwell
until my darling angel can come rescue me..... [comments] => 8 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 49 [informant] => hauntedscorp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

Eternal Damnation

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:15:38 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Trippin down a subway tunnel; minding my own biz
A rather peculiar elder man suddenly appears
He mutters and moans;
then casts some stones
afterward points angrily at me
"You've cursed us all with your bleak outcome,
and now with haste I shall send you home!"
Deep down, dark, into the fiery grasp of eternal damnation for YOU...
Before I could speak, the ground let go of my feet,
and I began my neverending descent into the pits of Hell...
That's where I'll dwell
until my darling angel can come rescue me.....

Copyright Â© hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-05-09 12:15:38]
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Re: Eternal Damnation (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:34:41 PM AEST
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"and then squirrel ate dib's crazy head..." yea, crazy. definitely. bring out the angel!!!
~Remy~

Re: Eternal Damnation (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:39:09 PM AEST
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Lmao@Remy. I know, I know...I'm working on it! Scorp. ; )

Re: Eternal Damnation (User Rating: 1 )
by Kyarn on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:58:23 PM AEST
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*amused greatly*
That's great...lol
I like.
~Kyarn

Re: Eternal Damnation (User Rating: 1 )
by Jyssvw on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 03:18:18 PM AEST
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lol..a peculiar man...hmmm wonder who he was..lol

Re: Eternal Damnation (User Rating: 1 )
by Thin_skin on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:50:30 AM AEST
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Riiiiiiiiiiight.......... lol very intriguing i must admit lol erm....yeh

Re: Eternal Damnation (User Rating: 1 )
by Thin_skin on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:50:30 AM AEST
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Riiiiiiiiiiight.......... lol very intriguing i must admit lol erm....yeh

Re: Eternal Damnation (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:25:29 PM AEST
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K so now I'm confused ... is the peculiar man the crazy one ? Or is that you ? LOL

"Calling all angels ... code 4 we have a situation here ... "

Nazzy ~
( Psssst ... I thought you weren't gonna tell anyone we met on the T. O. ... LOL )

Re: Eternal Damnation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:51:15 AM AEST
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Scorp, I really like this one. A nice little imaginative story with descriptive wording and the hope of the knight in shining armor that will come and rescue you from the pits of hell. A great writer leaving us readers wanting more…the sequel. Will the darling angel come and rescue you? Ah, another story we await from you.

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