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Logical Insanity

Contributed by miswin on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 08:18:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Watch how the kid sits on the beach
Sketching on the sand
Wondering why the wave washes it off
As far as the eye can see
And the mind can imagine
Reasons are designed
To satisfy you and me

As the breeze hits me on the face
And the winter comes
In the centre of all this mockery
It hurts to think of it all
Heads down and spirits high
In the world of my own
I've crossed alot of paths
Made alot of mistakes
Yet memory builds me

Like a candle in the moonlight
Beautiful to the ones close
Insignificant to the rest
Watching people rhyming lies
Complicating simple lifes
The streets say
The Silver smile fades
And the eyes never dry

I'm like lost in the mist on a bright day
If you recognize me,I'll recognize you
If not who will despise who??




Copyright © miswin ... [ 2005-05-09 08:18:58]
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Re: Logical Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:05:11 AM AEST
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i wouldn't think of it as retardation so much as being overwhelmed... but anyway, i remember feeling like this a few times. nice to look back and not be lost anymore!
~Remy~


Re: Logical Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by dthwlkr on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 03:07:57 PM AEST
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BRAVO!!!!!!
its beautiful i like the lines reasons designed....
and the last two stanzas are mind-numbing I like the hatred shown against life.it doesnt seem like a work of a retarded mind,i understand it cauz i too felt or maybe still feel a bit like this
gud stuff keep working




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