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Good and Bad
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
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Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 06:45:43 AM in AEST
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When the fates meet again,
The Good, The Bad will finally end.
Goodness and bad give morality,
Gives us emotions, and opinions.
These aspects give us humanity,
They make us people.
Two brothers: Good and Bad.
Twins: yin and yang.
Separated for eternality.
But how long is forever?
How long is too long?
The fates meet, the world dies.
No longer human, nobody tries.
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EverlastingDawn
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2005-05-09 06:45:43]
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Re: Good and Bad
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by Jaycee on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 07:02:26 AM AEST
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| An interesting poem that doesn't (at least in my case) spoon feed the exact message that you are making here. I'm thinking that you aren't referring to a worldwide/cataclysmic/judgement day kind of event, but something more personal. I hope that the demons in your life are extinguished and that people will try to make things better for you. |
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Re: Good and Bad
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by Remy on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:56:07 AM AEST
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so if nobody tries, does that make it apathy? just curious... good writing, though it seems very definitive of way too many ideas. i dunno, i still like it.
~Remy~ |
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Re: Good and Bad
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by jyssvw22 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 08:15:43 PM AEST
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| this was a very good write, simple short and to the point...sorta..nice job |
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Re: Good and Bad
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by Nomie on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:00:50 AM AEST
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i like this one. Very curious and mysterious in its purpose. But makes it very personal also to the reader, as seen above, everyone is interpretating it differently. I had a much different feel from it.
Great work! :) |
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