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You are my smiles and my tears.
You are my love and my pain.
You are my dreams and my fears.

You are the key to my lock.
You are the catch to my door.
You are the lid to my box.
You are the boards of my floor.

Without you there is nothing.
Without you I can't breate.
Without you I am bleeding.
Without you my soul would leave.

But the warmness of your smile,
and the softness of your face,
keeps me safe for the while.
The fears of my existance,
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Dedicated to Someone Special

Contributed by denno on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 06:19:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You are my sun and my rain.
You are my smiles and my tears.
You are my love and my pain.
You are my dreams and my fears.

You are the key to my lock.
You are the catch to my door.
You are the lid to my box.
You are the boards of my floor.

Without you there is nothing.
Without you I can't breate.
Without you I am bleeding.
Without you my soul would leave.

But the warmness of your smile,
and the softness of your face,
keeps me safe for the while.
The fears of my existance,
leave without a trace

Copyright © denno ... [ 2005-05-09 06:19:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dedicated to Someone Special (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 08:27:28 AM AEST
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All I can say Is brilliant..Love it ~~~Michelle~~~

Re: Dedicated to Someone Special (User Rating: 1 )
by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:01:53 AM AEST
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Awww how emotional and just really lovely! The way you describe your lover as the key to even the basic things in life shows how much you are actually in love with him . Great work!

Keep writing,
xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx

Re: Dedicated to Someone Special (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:53:48 AM AEST
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i'm a sucker for writing like this, so simple and sweet! very cute, hope the special someone catches a glimpse of this...
~Remy~

Re: Dedicated to Someone Special (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:20:24 PM AEST
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Really liked this. I feel the same about that special someone in my life. Hope everything works out for you and that person. Good write.

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