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Array ( [sid] => 93747 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Indigenous Puzzle [time] => 2005-05-08 23:32:02 [hometext] => I used symbolic imagery to have the puzzle represent a persons life where another person tries to organize and sort it out although they dont understand fully which makes no sense...comments plz.. thank you [bodytext] => Pour me out of my box
Scatter me over your floor
Sort out my matching parts
Try to solve me some more

Its harder than it looks
To figure out my brain
Connect me piece by piece
You think you've got me made

Somehow you dont know me
When assembling is done
I look so different now
Your are severely stunned

Blown away by the fact
I'm more then you had planned
No less then what I am
You cant begin to handle that

I'm the puzzle that
You cannot figure out
Or even understand
Dont even try me when,
You only know half of my story [comments] => 1 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 64 [informant] => garyforawhile [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Indigenous Puzzle

Contributed by garyforawhile on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 11:32:02 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Pour me out of my box
Scatter me over your floor
Sort out my matching parts
Try to solve me some more

Its harder than it looks
To figure out my brain
Connect me piece by piece
You think you've got me made

Somehow you dont know me
When assembling is done
I look so different now
Your are severely stunned

Blown away by the fact
I'm more then you had planned
No less then what I am
You cant begin to handle that

I'm the puzzle that
You cannot figure out
Or even understand
Dont even try me when,
You only know half of my story

Copyright © garyforawhile ... [ 2005-05-08 23:32:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Indigenous Puzzle (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 05:24:49 PM AEST
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Well done..great analogy..
Jenni

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