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Never Giving Up
Contributed by
curtisc
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Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 11:15:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can't just let this fall apart,
she means way too much to me.
I hold her so deep within my heart,
only with her am I truely free.
I haven't seen her for quite a while,
and it's driving me insane.
I just want to see her smile,
I miss her too much to explain.
She slipped through my fingers before,
but then came back out of nowhere.
I hope she hasn't completely closed the door,
because without her I'm beyond repair.
I'm never giving up, my heart won't let me...
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2005-05-08 23:15:37]
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Re: Never Giving Up
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 04:31:03 AM AEST
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Curtis this is a sad and heart breaking write. I hope and pray things work out 4 u and ur girl. May ur heart get back the love it desires my friend. Take care and goodluck.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Never Giving Up
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 08:09:55 AM AEST
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I hear a longing heart so there is always hope it'll happen sooner or later time is
on your side yes love is a gentle but never
the less, forcefull persuader . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Never Giving Up
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:08:52 AM AEST
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| Oh Curtis...I didn't think you'd be back at this place so soon. This write was filled with such emotions, longing, sadness...nonetheless beautifully expressed. Tanya |
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