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Yielded by confusion and sent to a field of echos
To be heard shows that someones there
But being heard doesn't mean they care
Send me to the tracks and dispose the field
Hear we can skip and see but be blind
Filled by positive assumptions
Following without knowledge
Or questioning where one should be
While being seemly accurate
To strike a pose to offer more
Guiding the ones who don't care to look
Seeing desperately and staring blankly
To travel to the depths of this
Will bring it back as it strikes twice more
By putting pieces together
And figuring out for just ones self
Not for others just for one to look
To see and to learn to try to comprehend
To grasp the subject
In an effort to understand.
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artifical

Contributed by glue on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 06:39:26 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

What manufactured thoughts brought me to conclusions
Yielded by confusion and sent to a field of echos
To be heard shows that someones there
But being heard doesn't mean they care
Send me to the tracks and dispose the field
Hear we can skip and see but be blind
Filled by positive assumptions
Following without knowledge
Or questioning where one should be
While being seemly accurate
To strike a pose to offer more
Guiding the ones who don't care to look
Seeing desperately and staring blankly
To travel to the depths of this
Will bring it back as it strikes twice more
By putting pieces together
And figuring out for just ones self
Not for others just for one to look
To see and to learn to try to comprehend
To grasp the subject
In an effort to understand.

Copyright © glue ... [ 2005-05-08 18:39:26]
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Re: artifical (User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 09:03:37 PM AEST
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i liked the line 'filled by positive assumptions'... like the optimistic way of thinking that gets someone in trouble but also could give someone the good spirits thath they need to excel... and i also liked that coming together of the last few lines

Re: artifical (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 10:00:22 AM AEST
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Someone is there
following without question
Filled with positive assumptions

Artifical
Most likely
But still striving to learn
In a mix of emotions

Your words are nicely written
Gets me thinking
They help seperate thing
in my thoughts

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