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Vicious Cycle
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 06:18:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Deceit is to Deception
what Emotion is to Pain
and Hope is so Sinister;
like Guilt is to Shame
Denial is to Freedom
what Chance is to Choice,
Longing does to Torture
like Sorrow to Despair
and Secrets lead to Confusion
like Rejection does to Fear...
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hauntedscorp
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2005-05-08 18:18:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Vicious Cycle
(User Rating: 1 ) by spazz911 on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:32:24 PM AEST (User
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i like it...its unique....a little overbearing, but still good. keep it up...
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Re: Vicious Cycle
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 09:39:55 PM AEST (User
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Interesting write, short but powerful!! I like it.
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Re: Vicious Cycle
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kyarn on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 01:02:04 PM AEST (User
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Definitely interesting...Good. |
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Re: Vicious Cycle
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:19:26 PM AEST (User
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I like this .... the correlation between sometimes opposite emotions ... the crisp shortness of it ... I think it kinda fits into the same category that Double Speak would.
Nice one, Scorp
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Vicious Cycle
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:41:29 AM AEST (User
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Clever and definitely good. Yes indeedy...very good :) |
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