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[aid] => mick
[title] => She is
[time] => 2005-05-08 14:46:12
[hometext] => this poem is written as if i'm look at myself from someone elses view, please understand the words are meant for the meaning
[bodytext] => She’s looking She’s looking for a place Where she can drown her tears Be held in her best friend’s arms Away from hopes and fears She’s asking for a reason Why she should not go Hated by society why we do not know (INTRO) Hatred has filled her she can’t fake her pain She may be the beast but now she has been slain Once living high she is now living low Haunted by the words inside we say it isn’t so Lying to herself to who she really be Covering her eyes so she cannot see Denial is her answer to every questioned tone Telling herself people are laughing when she is really alone (CHORUS) The anger is excruciating building up inside Every choice that she makes another will decide Her cries are cuts and tears the blood shed Eyes bore bleeding pupils the colour red She looks upon her family as a one of doom All their shouts and taunts are twanging off the room The voices inside her head are making her ears bleed Telling her not to listen stop but then take heed (CHORUS) All around her she hates it all Looking on the world but then she’s feeling small She could cry and scream but no one would hear Living in a nightmare becoming her real fear There’s no one else to turn to she’s all alone and scared Trusting in her friendships when most of them have tarred Fed up she’s locked away inside Anxiety the ecstasy that she cannot describe (CHORUS) Lying to herself is just a simple mask Defeating the object of a blundered task Eyes glazing over she cannot see That this girl is searching, looking straight at me. 9-10/6/04 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 13 [informant] => snookams [notes] => (Double post deleted but comment added here by Mod) by hauntedscorp on Sunday, May 08 2005 @ 18:44:47 CDT (User Info | Send a Message) Heavy stuff...I really enjoyed this. I really like the part; "Every choice she makes; another will decide, her cries are cuts and tears the blood shed..." Full of emotion....Please keep writing; you're very good. Scorp. [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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