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Array ( [sid] => 93695 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why Must I die? [time] => 2005-05-08 14:09:21 [hometext] => It was intended to be a song for my band but came out more as a poem so here it is [bodytext] => WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHY MUST I DIE
WHY MUST PAIN BE MY DESTINY

I GAVE MY SHARE, OF LIFE AND HOPE
AND GAVE A NEW LIGHT TO PEOPLE WHEN THEY NEEDED IT MOST.
SO WHY DO THEY PUSH ME INTO THIS LONELINESS AND DARKNESS,
FORCED TO LIVE WITHIN ME, I RECEDE INTO MY EMPTINESS
I WALK THROUGH THE SANDS ALONE
AND THATS HOW I STAND TODAY, YES ALONE I STAND TODAY

WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHY MUST I DIE
WON'T SOMEONE TELL ME WHY MUST PAIN BE MY DESTINY

SO TELL ME WHY MUST I FEEL, THE COLD KNIFE ON MY NECK,
MY SCARRED, AILING SOUL SHATTERS AS I PUSH IT DEEPER WITHIN ME.
AS BLOOD COMES FLOWING THROUGH, I AM PULLED DEEPER INTO MY INSANITY
I AM LYING ON THE COLD, DAMP FLOOR, MY LIFE SPILLED ALL AROUND ME.

SO TELL ME WHY MUST I DIE
HELP ME FOR PAIN IS MY DESTINY

AS I LIE WAITING FOR MY VEINS TO RUN DRY
SCREAMING IN AGONY, ONE LAST TIME FOR HELP I CRY
WAITING FOR HOPE, FOR A MILLION MILES I CONTINUE TO FALL
BUT I KNOW ONLY PAIN SHALL ANSWER MY CALL

SO I DIE, ALONE, IN DEATH AS IN LIFE
NO HOPE,NO DESIRE, EXCEPT THAT........

WHY MUST I SUFFER LIKE A KING REMOVED FROM HIS THRONE
MY AGONY IS SUCH FOR I TOO DIE ALONE

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 36 [informant] => dthwlkr [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Why Must I die?

Contributed by dthwlkr on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 02:09:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHY MUST I DIE
WHY MUST PAIN BE MY DESTINY

I GAVE MY SHARE, OF LIFE AND HOPE
AND GAVE A NEW LIGHT TO PEOPLE WHEN THEY NEEDED IT MOST.
SO WHY DO THEY PUSH ME INTO THIS LONELINESS AND DARKNESS,
FORCED TO LIVE WITHIN ME, I RECEDE INTO MY EMPTINESS
I WALK THROUGH THE SANDS ALONE
AND THATS HOW I STAND TODAY, YES ALONE I STAND TODAY

WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHY MUST I DIE
WON'T SOMEONE TELL ME WHY MUST PAIN BE MY DESTINY

SO TELL ME WHY MUST I FEEL, THE COLD KNIFE ON MY NECK,
MY SCARRED, AILING SOUL SHATTERS AS I PUSH IT DEEPER WITHIN ME.
AS BLOOD COMES FLOWING THROUGH, I AM PULLED DEEPER INTO MY INSANITY
I AM LYING ON THE COLD, DAMP FLOOR, MY LIFE SPILLED ALL AROUND ME.

SO TELL ME WHY MUST I DIE
HELP ME FOR PAIN IS MY DESTINY

AS I LIE WAITING FOR MY VEINS TO RUN DRY
SCREAMING IN AGONY, ONE LAST TIME FOR HELP I CRY
WAITING FOR HOPE, FOR A MILLION MILES I CONTINUE TO FALL
BUT I KNOW ONLY PAIN SHALL ANSWER MY CALL

SO I DIE, ALONE, IN DEATH AS IN LIFE
NO HOPE,NO DESIRE, EXCEPT THAT........

WHY MUST I SUFFER LIKE A KING REMOVED FROM HIS THRONE
MY AGONY IS SUCH FOR I TOO DIE ALONE





Copyright © dthwlkr ... [ 2005-05-08 14:09:21]
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Re: Why Must I die? (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 03:32:48 PM AEST
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Pretty cool. It reminds me a bit of DevilDriver.


Re: Why Must I die? (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 06:30:16 PM AEST
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Very good---I hear it like a punk song. Excellent choice of words in this write. "I am lying on the cold, damp floor, my life spilled all around me..." Chilling, sad...Scorp.


Re: Why Must I die? (User Rating: 1 )
by Supergurl1071 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:09:13 PM AEST
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Wow, I'm extremely impressed, feelings are expressed so well and the words are very powerful. I feel your pain completely. Great word choice and it's all done so clearly and visually. Loved it!




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