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I bring my journal,
Where ever I may go,
Things I want others to know,
Things I won’t ever show.

I’m happy,
As the sun rises above,
I’m sad,
When I miss those I love,
I’m glad,
When I’m not mad.

I try to be who I’ am,
I want better instead of worse,
Sometimes when I cry alone,
I imagine some place where I can go.

I’m a writer,
Starving to be famous,
I’m free,
Still I want more,
I’m troubled,
Faith keeps my world from crumbling.

When clouds are gray,
I sit outside to write,
If I’m by myself,
I try to handle all I’ve dealt.

I hide secrets,
So you cannot see,
I have lost hope,
Only to get it back,
I scream inside,
Behind the walls of my room,
Death seems like its right,
I sometimes want suicide.

Pages keep flipping,
My mind pours out more,
It holds me up from slamming on the floor,
I feel sorry for myself a lot,
Deep down I love so many that I’ve got.

Don’t judge me for my writing,
Don’t judge me for my thoughts,
Don’t judge me because I’m different,
Just love me because I trust you.

© Care Strom
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Journal With My Thought’s

Contributed by KishaLovesCare126 on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 05:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

5/7/2005

I bring my journal,
Where ever I may go,
Things I want others to know,
Things I won’t ever show.

I’m happy,
As the sun rises above,
I’m sad,
When I miss those I love,
I’m glad,
When I’m not mad.

I try to be who I’ am,
I want better instead of worse,
Sometimes when I cry alone,
I imagine some place where I can go.

I’m a writer,
Starving to be famous,
I’m free,
Still I want more,
I’m troubled,
Faith keeps my world from crumbling.

When clouds are gray,
I sit outside to write,
If I’m by myself,
I try to handle all I’ve dealt.

I hide secrets,
So you cannot see,
I have lost hope,
Only to get it back,
I scream inside,
Behind the walls of my room,
Death seems like its right,
I sometimes want suicide.

Pages keep flipping,
My mind pours out more,
It holds me up from slamming on the floor,
I feel sorry for myself a lot,
Deep down I love so many that I’ve got.

Don’t judge me for my writing,
Don’t judge me for my thoughts,
Don’t judge me because I’m different,
Just love me because I trust you.

© Care Strom

Copyright Â© KishaLovesCare126 ... [ 2005-05-07 17:54:30]
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Re: Journal With My Thought’s (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 11:55:07 PM AEST
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A very honestly written poem. I enjoyed it all
especially the last stanza.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Journal With My Thought’s (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:41:35 AM AEST
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Wow a very good write with so much trust and pain in it. I don’t know how much is true but I feel its from the heart and its written beautifully. I know I to have thought about suicide before when times felt to hard so your not alone their. I even have a suicide note posted on here under lost love. But again this is a very good write and I can really relate. I’m a melancholy person so I really liked the part about sitting out when the sky is gray. Take care my friend and I look forward to many more of your beautiful works of art. Someday you’ll be the writer you dream of being and your already that writer in my book. Good bye for now your friend….Steve

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