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Drowning
Contributed by
chade
on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 01:34:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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With all of the emotions of the day,
Wizzing past
The wind like clay,
Falling upon a drowned body
Drifting through the rivers and the seas.
When the fist came down
No one was there,
The burden was his
To bare on his own.
If only he had asked...
If only he had called...
One would have answered
And the others would have followed.
But instead,
A drowned body full of clay
This day was found
Washed up on the beach.
Of the name and origin we are sure,
Because he was our friend.
Copyright ©
chade
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2005-05-07 13:34:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Drowning
(User Rating: 1 ) by TwiztidAngel on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 08:43:43 PM AEST (User
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Your poem would be good if you could just make it a little clearer to everyone what your poem poem means.
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