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with this bullett
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 11:48:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My lips part to take a B r e a t h ....
as my eyes lose focus in your endless D e p t h s ...
loaded and cocked my gun of problems
anticipating the relief in the release of this B u l l e t t ....
The sun in my eyes im ready to R U N
O n e shot, and my problems are D o n e...
Its this silver bullett With the pain packed in its shell
that amongst others will D w e l l ...
Deep in my H e a r t ....
D e e p in my h e a r t ....
Lies this beautiful bullett....
sending me back to S t a r t ....
Copyright ©
bttrflynajar
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2005-05-07 11:48:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: with this bullett
(User Rating: 1 ) by In_a_while on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:49:33 PM AEST (User
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Very nice write andi'm very glad you shared it. It had very dark imagery that was to do with the gun. All in all i liked it a lot, and hope you keep up the good work. |
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Re: with this bullett
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chade on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 01:54:38 PM AEST (User
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wow thats well good. I like the emphasis of the capital letters its a good write and a good read. |
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