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Array ( [sid] => 93548 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Do [time] => 2005-05-06 23:50:26 [hometext] => something bittersweet... [bodytext] => well i don't suppose you want to hear this, right?
yes i put up a slight altercation on the situation.
no apology is coming from me for changing my mind.
forget it tonight while we party, are you listening?
stop and think about it minute, i wish you please!
there's no good excuse even with plenty of use.
there was never a lie though haphazard car keys.
it's no tease, i'm more devisive than indecisive.

here comes the truth like the back of a hand
i don't expect you to understand it.
a simple word there goes a kick to the can
another notch of presumed affidavits.

there yes i'll save my breath.
now watch we'll head out west.

i don't hope to convince you otherwise.
one more move and gone from your sight.
that's what you wanted, was it?
that would solve it, wouldn't it?
like i could help it
never mind forget it

here comes the truth like the front of a man
i don't expect you to understand me.
a simple word there goes a prick to the can
another notch carved in so blandly.

there yes i'll save this breath.
no watch i'll go home west.

it's best to think that this is what i wanted to
didn't think my choices would mean much i'm through
so any thought of reconnecting
on this last fling
please don't tell me
i don't want to think about it anymore...
don't mean to bore you...
but i do. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 21 [informant] => remy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
I Do

Contributed by remy on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:50:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



well i don't suppose you want to hear this, right?
yes i put up a slight altercation on the situation.
no apology is coming from me for changing my mind.
forget it tonight while we party, are you listening?
stop and think about it minute, i wish you please!
there's no good excuse even with plenty of use.
there was never a lie though haphazard car keys.
it's no tease, i'm more devisive than indecisive.

here comes the truth like the back of a hand
i don't expect you to understand it.
a simple word there goes a kick to the can
another notch of presumed affidavits.

there yes i'll save my breath.
now watch we'll head out west.

i don't hope to convince you otherwise.
one more move and gone from your sight.
that's what you wanted, was it?
that would solve it, wouldn't it?
like i could help it
never mind forget it

here comes the truth like the front of a man
i don't expect you to understand me.
a simple word there goes a prick to the can
another notch carved in so blandly.

there yes i'll save this breath.
no watch i'll go home west.

it's best to think that this is what i wanted to
didn't think my choices would mean much i'm through
so any thought of reconnecting
on this last fling
please don't tell me
i don't want to think about it anymore...
don't mean to bore you...
but i do.




Copyright © remy ... [ 2005-05-06 23:50:26]
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Re: I Do (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 06:41:17 AM AEST
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Very interesting write, not sure I captured it all. But seems to be about conflict and ineffective communication over reoccuring issues, resulting in a split .....going seperate ways?

Unique style, good job

Will


Re: I Do (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:18:11 AM AEST
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A bittersweet write mixed with alot of emotion. Very well conveyed. I can feel ur pain in between the lines. A great write. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~


Re: I Do (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 11:53:18 AM AEST
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i love the way you write, your words flow quite nicely... this poem is great!




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