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Array ( [sid] => 93511 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Good-bye [time] => 2005-05-06 18:35:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Take my body
Take my soul
Time to say good-bye
Its time to go

Everything is unfair
Everything sucks
No one ****** cares
I never had any luck

I have nothing to say
I dont want to live anymore
I am always having the worst days
I am just going to walk out the door

I am always depressed
I am always crying
I am always sad
I always wish I was dying

Everything that happens to me is all bad
What good can happen to me?
Every damn second, Im always mad
There is nothing on in this world that will complete me

I am a mistake
No one wanted me here
I am hate
I want to be far away and no one near

I am leaving now
I am saying Good-bye
All because of you, the reason I am going to die. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xdeadxdollyx [notes] => |||||||Partially edited out, for use of a banned word. Please refer to site rules, and ensure that, in future, banned words are deleted prior to submission. Thank you. ---Moderator_14||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Good-bye

Contributed by xdeadxdollyx on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 06:35:43 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Take my body
Take my soul
Time to say good-bye
Its time to go

Everything is unfair
Everything sucks
No one ****** cares
I never had any luck

I have nothing to say
I dont want to live anymore
I am always having the worst days
I am just going to walk out the door

I am always depressed
I am always crying
I am always sad
I always wish I was dying

Everything that happens to me is all bad
What good can happen to me?
Every damn second, Im always mad
There is nothing on in this world that will complete me

I am a mistake
No one wanted me here
I am hate
I want to be far away and no one near

I am leaving now
I am saying Good-bye
All because of you, the reason I am going to die.




Copyright © xdeadxdollyx ... [ 2005-05-06 18:35:43]
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Re: Good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 07:58:26 PM AEST
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Very hard-hit write...lots of emotion. PM me if you ever wanna talk to somebody...Scorp.


Re: Good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:09:21 AM AEST
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Aww this is so sad and heart breaking. I'm so sorry u feel like this. Depression is the worst thing anybody can live through. I know because I suffer from major depression myself. Each day is an on going battle for people like us to make it through the day.
Please if u need someone to talk to or someone who'll listen. I'm here 4 u ok. Hang tuff and chin up my friend.
heaps of heartfelt *hugs* 4 u,
~sue~


Re: Good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:59:59 AM AEST
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Hey nicole. I liked this poem but suicide i guess isn't the answer. even though it calls and pulls you in but you just can't let it win. I hope you are doing okay..

**darkangeleyes57**




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