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[aid] => mick
[title] => Overcoming this sickness
[time] => 2005-05-06 10:45:30
[hometext] => wasnt feeing to good when I worte this one please comment and thell me what you think. enjoy.
[bodytext] => Overcoming this sickness I can’t take this pain any longer I just wish it would go away The emptiness that I feel will drive me mad I don’t know how much longer it will last So, I will make it end myself. My skin is so pale I look like I’m already dead I don’t know what my mother will say God, I hope she won’t be frightened “Sammy, are you feeling better?” The bowl shattered on the ground as the door opened We saw the red that covered the floor The sight was agonizing to behold As it flooded the doorway, we could do nothing It was too late and it couldn’t be undone The thick pasty-like red substance Was reflecting our stares of astonishment And I looked up at my mother and frowned As she knelt down to wipe up the mess When she was done she stood up. “Oh Sammy I am sorry I know you aren’t feeling good And asked for this awhile ago I’ll go make you another one Don’t worry we have plenty of Campbell’s.” And I chuckled as she went out the door and down the stares That our conversation was ended with tomato soup. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Shishke_Bob [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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