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5x6 that’s how it goes
To hide their numbers with few lines of pain
So that the true number no one knows
And to not have great suspicion gain

Wife, I am sorry for it
Because you no longer here be
The pain I inflict I will not quit
Because its you I long to see

Before you I had scares
Few because I had no one
With you gone my heart is behind bars
And my life is all but done

In shadow I cut
To hide me from you gaze
To bring relief but,
There are these thoughts of better days

Forgive me dear little girl
I haven’t seen you
But my love for did unfurl
And for your lose this is what I do

I will not quit this sinful addiction
Even though it’s something that I don’t want
Even with this painful conviction
My inner pain I will not flaunt

So forgive me my family that is lost
I will try not to commit this again
For you flowers I have tossed
And will try to my new life to begin.
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30 today, not of age

Contributed by heartless_soul on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:09:31 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



30 today, not of age

5x6 that’s how it goes
To hide their numbers with few lines of pain
So that the true number no one knows
And to not have great suspicion gain

Wife, I am sorry for it
Because you no longer here be
The pain I inflict I will not quit
Because its you I long to see

Before you I had scares
Few because I had no one
With you gone my heart is behind bars
And my life is all but done

In shadow I cut
To hide me from you gaze
To bring relief but,
There are these thoughts of better days

Forgive me dear little girl
I haven’t seen you
But my love for did unfurl
And for your lose this is what I do

I will not quit this sinful addiction
Even though it’s something that I don’t want
Even with this painful conviction
My inner pain I will not flaunt

So forgive me my family that is lost
I will try not to commit this again
For you flowers I have tossed
And will try to my new life to begin.




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Re: 30 today, not of age (User Rating: 1 )
by FushigiNaButterfly on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:52:37 AM AEST
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Wow, that's ... sad. That person needs a hug. And maybe some help. Meep, aside from some spelling errors, it was really nice.


Re: 30 today, not of age (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:27:53 AM AEST
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I like this...alot of emotion. The second last verse is my fav...Good write. Scorp.


Re: 30 today, not of age (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 05:39:27 AM AEST
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It sad. god give us many chances to change.

poem was sad and nice to read. good luck..




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