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Array ( [sid] => 93424 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confusion of Sorts [time] => 2005-05-05 20:13:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Icy glances reflecting
On those whom I once knew
Delivering me misery
All I once knew is untrue

Since my reality
Was shaken and disturbed
I stopped dreaming
Feeling too perturbed

Advice has been placed
Onto my once strong shoulders
Find the core of the sorrow
Easily remove life's wretched boulders

Finding a core
That does not lure
Is a difficult task
To fight and endure

Time flies much too quickly
As do my days
Rushing as a stream of water
Foggy in a haze

I just need some time
To part with what I don't desire
And one measly match
To light my life's burnt out fire [comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 61 [informant] => dreamer_for_eternity [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Confusion of Sorts

Contributed by dreamer_for_eternity on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:13:53 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Icy glances reflecting
On those whom I once knew
Delivering me misery
All I once knew is untrue

Since my reality
Was shaken and disturbed
I stopped dreaming
Feeling too perturbed

Advice has been placed
Onto my once strong shoulders
Find the core of the sorrow
Easily remove life's wretched boulders

Finding a core
That does not lure
Is a difficult task
To fight and endure

Time flies much too quickly
As do my days
Rushing as a stream of water
Foggy in a haze

I just need some time
To part with what I don't desire
And one measly match
To light my life's burnt out fire

Copyright © dreamer_for_eternity ... [ 2005-05-05 20:13:53]
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Re: Confusion of Sorts (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:38:58 PM AEST
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absolutely remarkable poem! i loved the last stanza and ur word use was great and good flow
well done, i can relate so much

Re: Confusion of Sorts (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 11:02:34 PM AEST
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Yeah I can relate to this as I too need to
relight the fading fires of my life. This was a
great poem the title stood out for some
reason and I am glad that I read this. Thanks
for sharing it.

Bobo (Joel)

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