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let me free the fears in you
because i have this heart

i'm a cloud of love for you
let me free the dove in you
because i have this heart

i'm the rain that rains for you
to wash away the stains in you
because i have this heart

i'm the play that plays for you
actors that sing praise for you
because i have this heart

I'm the tear that falls for you
the echo that does call for you
because i have this heart

i wait for you, my fate for you
i stay for you, my day's for you

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Because I have this heart...

Contributed by In_a_While on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:47:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

i'm a sea of tears for you
let me free the fears in you
because i have this heart

i'm a cloud of love for you
let me free the dove in you
because i have this heart

i'm the rain that rains for you
to wash away the stains in you
because i have this heart

i'm the play that plays for you
actors that sing praise for you
because i have this heart

I'm the tear that falls for you
the echo that does call for you
because i have this heart

i wait for you, my fate for you
i stay for you, my day's for you

all... because i have this heart

Copyright Â© In_a_While ... [ 2005-05-05 13:47:13]
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Re: Because I have this heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:55:35 PM AEST
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my god!!! this is such an excellent write
the ryhme is the best part about it
the use of words it keep me going throught the whole poem
it was amazing
i can relate to this poem
love is strong and i do everything and i would do anything for the one i love
great write looking very forward to more

sweetstraner|

Re: Because I have this heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:03:00 PM AEST
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this is purely romantic she will love this should you let her read it
Michelle

Re: Because I have this heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by bethie on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:03:54 PM AEST
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Sensitivity can be a burden, "because i have this heart".

Very sensitive poem.

Re: Because I have this heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:24:04 PM AEST
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That was really, really beautiful...I think my heart just skipped a beat...*gulp*

Scorp.

Re: Because I have this heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kachina on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:34:46 PM AEST
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Wow! This is great! Beautiful!

Re: Because I have this heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by bear on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:43:38 PM AEST
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There is only one word for this poem......beautiful.

Re: Because I have this heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 01:38:33 PM AEST
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Truly as master piece this write was and very well written. I’m not big on poems that use the same line more then once in the same write. I only have one write that does that but this was very well done and much enjoyed. I really liked the last stanza
wait for you, my fate for you
i stay for you, my day's for you
So many times love can feel like your fate when its gone and this last verse really left the reader in pain for all you lost and event though its gone your heart will always feel it. Thank you for asking me to read this piece I’m glad I did and it was much enjoyed. Take care my friend….Steve

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