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My mind keeps spinning
Thinking dreaded thoughts of you

Thinking of time we spend
And recalling fantasies dreamt
I wonder what happened to you

The way you'd smash things
The way you'd bash things
And people
Your Friends

Never thought it'd end like this
But who'd guess it ever would
I only ever loved you

But you said you'd stop
You said things will be fine
You lied to me again

And you did it over
And over again
It wasn't worth it

You wish you could go back
I know thats how you feel
But you can't

You know what you did to me
And how you made me feel
But you didn't understand
It was a big deal

You broke our souls apart
Our auras were conjoined
You broke that bond between us

I never regret my time with you
It's a lesson in discuise
And I guess all can do is thank you
As I let my mind slowly rise

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Look what you did to me

Contributed by tres_estrellas on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:10:18 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Raging out of control
My mind keeps spinning
Thinking dreaded thoughts of you

Thinking of time we spend
And recalling fantasies dreamt
I wonder what happened to you

The way you'd smash things
The way you'd bash things
And people
Your Friends

Never thought it'd end like this
But who'd guess it ever would
I only ever loved you

But you said you'd stop
You said things will be fine
You lied to me again

And you did it over
And over again
It wasn't worth it

You wish you could go back
I know thats how you feel
But you can't

You know what you did to me
And how you made me feel
But you didn't understand
It was a big deal

You broke our souls apart
Our auras were conjoined
You broke that bond between us

I never regret my time with you
It's a lesson in discuise
And I guess all can do is thank you
As I let my mind slowly rise

Copyright © tres_estrellas ... [ 2005-05-05 07:10:18]
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Re: Look what you did to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Concrete_Rose on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 10:32:12 AM AEST
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Beautiful, I loved it, great job!

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