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I love you
I hate it
Watching the deep red
Pulling, dragging it out of yourself
I shiver
And tense up
You feel nothing
You are falling
Falling into darkness
I want to teach you
I want to show you
But you need to learn on your own
But what if you go?
Please don't leave
I get cold
Being alone
Just don't over do it
And we'll be okay
Don't do that too often
And you'll be okay
I know you hear me
But you cut yourself deeper
Theres something
That you want to teach me
But I know
I've seen it
And more
I don't like it
I did
But I don't
And why do you?
I wish I felt nothing
But I do
I want to be numb
But I won't go that far
I want to be with you
But not like this [comments] => 5 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 72 [informant] => tres_estrellas [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Not Like This

Contributed by tres_estrellas on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:52:29 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

I watch you
I love you
I hate it
Watching the deep red
Pulling, dragging it out of yourself
I shiver
And tense up
You feel nothing
You are falling
Falling into darkness
I want to teach you
I want to show you
But you need to learn on your own
But what if you go?
Please don't leave
I get cold
Being alone
Just don't over do it
And we'll be okay
Don't do that too often
And you'll be okay
I know you hear me
But you cut yourself deeper
Theres something
That you want to teach me
But I know
I've seen it
And more
I don't like it
I did
But I don't
And why do you?
I wish I felt nothing
But I do
I want to be numb
But I won't go that far
I want to be with you
But not like this

Copyright © tres_estrellas ... [ 2005-05-05 02:52:29]
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Re: Not Like This (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:02:33 AM AEST
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so sad and emotional write.
well done on this.

Re: Not Like This (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:07:19 AM AEST
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So sad.. well done!

Re: Not Like This (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:34:39 AM AEST
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Awesome writing. Very sad but written from deep within. I hope this write wakes this person up.
huggs,
emy

Re: Not Like This (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 05:04:44 AM AEST
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This was such a sad write, conveying such vivid expressions. I simply adored this.

Well done.

Jane~

Re: Not Like This (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:32:35 PM AEST
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Very strong emotions kept together with a unique style of write. Keep you head up, i liked it a bundles!

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