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Is my life nothing but a blunder?
As I sit alone
Wondering what they would write on my headstone

There is no light in this room
This is the place I shall make my tomb
With the end of a blade
I will make my life fade
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The end of a blade

Contributed by bear on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:54:25 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As I sit and wonder
Is my life nothing but a blunder?
As I sit alone
Wondering what they would write on my headstone

There is no light in this room
This is the place I shall make my tomb
With the end of a blade
I will make my life fade

Copyright © bear ... [ 2005-05-05 01:54:25]
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Re: The end of a blade (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:08:27 AM AEST
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Very, very, very sad but good writing.
Hope u feel better real soon.
huggs,
emy

Re: The end of a blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:13:04 AM AEST
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sad so very sad.
please dont do it your life means alot.
if you ever need to talk let me know and PM me.take care

Re: The end of a blade (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:31:02 AM AEST
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Lots of emotion....Keep writing, it's good to let it all out. Scorp

Re: The end of a blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:51:16 AM AEST
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This is very sad! alot of emotions in this poem but good.. hope you get better soon.

hugs butterflygirl40.

Re: The end of a blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:04:15 PM AEST
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So many times we feel as if death is our only resort in life. It isn't.
This poem speaks volumes for your sadness and expression is vital to feeling better about ourselves. Write more and get all the pent up emotions out. Write about who/what is troubling you and in time you'll find the healing spot you need to be in. Best of luck to you in finding and healing the pain. God Bless! Angel always...joni

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