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I’m felling crushed by time
Worry and doubt are setting in
My love feels like a crime

You said you needed space from me
Your mind I can not change
I feel so lonely so insecure
My heart it feels so strange

Your friendship is slipping away from me
It’s like having a hand that’s full of sand
The harder I struggle to hold you
The quicker you slip from my hand

I struggle to hold on to you my love
Time seems to be running slow
I have no choice but to walk away
No choice but to let you go

I feel I’m stuck in limbo now
I’m falling into an abyss
I know that something’s lacking now
And I know that it’s you that I miss

I feel worse off without you
You’re an important person to me
I wish that you could just realise
The friend you had in me.
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Silence

Contributed by phill on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:21:34 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The silence is overwhelming
I’m felling crushed by time
Worry and doubt are setting in
My love feels like a crime

You said you needed space from me
Your mind I can not change
I feel so lonely so insecure
My heart it feels so strange

Your friendship is slipping away from me
It’s like having a hand that’s full of sand
The harder I struggle to hold you
The quicker you slip from my hand

I struggle to hold on to you my love
Time seems to be running slow
I have no choice but to walk away
No choice but to let you go

I feel I’m stuck in limbo now
I’m falling into an abyss
I know that something’s lacking now
And I know that it’s you that I miss

I feel worse off without you
You’re an important person to me
I wish that you could just realise
The friend you had in me.

Copyright Â© phill ... [ 2005-05-05 00:21:34]
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Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:31:28 AM AEST
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Sad poem, but good write...

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:05:54 AM AEST
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Very sad but awesome writing.
I hope things work out for u really soon.
huggs,
emy

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:44:39 PM AEST
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Very strong and from the heart. I have the same feelings for someone close to me, these words are like the ones i couldn't find for myself. Thanks for the awesome write and good luck to ya!!

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:43:03 AM AEST
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This Touched my heart in more ways than one....I am truely Speechless...Its Beautiful
~~~Michelle~~~

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