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My heart is shttered, torn, and broken; just like me
Father your dying, wish i'd known you better
Mother your lying, to me and yourself
Brother your gone, six years now still i miss you dearly
Sister two kids, and another on the way, why are you ruining your life?
Me, alone through all of this, just crying, crying,crying
Every single day of it just wishing i was dying
None of you even cared about the pills; the ones i still wish had taken my life
The blodd i've shed from my wrist, the scars i can no longer hide
The longing feeling to love you all, i is fear dissapearing
I lock away all my pain, only the razor knows the names i call upon myself:b!tch,slut, whore, lier
All of these i know i am, but can i truly help it?
If only one of you would call my name, it would stop the crying, stop the pain
Stop the self inflicted injuries, stop the blinding heartache
If only you could tell me how, much you love me so
Id me happy, rather sappy,
But happy, for a family [comments] => 5 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 32 [informant] => crazygirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Family

Contributed by crazygirl on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:37:34 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Im a broken soul, cant you see?
My heart is shttered, torn, and broken; just like me
Father your dying, wish i'd known you better
Mother your lying, to me and yourself
Brother your gone, six years now still i miss you dearly
Sister two kids, and another on the way, why are you ruining your life?
Me, alone through all of this, just crying, crying,crying
Every single day of it just wishing i was dying
None of you even cared about the pills; the ones i still wish had taken my life
The blodd i've shed from my wrist, the scars i can no longer hide
The longing feeling to love you all, i is fear dissapearing
I lock away all my pain, only the razor knows the names i call upon myself:b!tch,slut, whore, lier
All of these i know i am, but can i truly help it?
If only one of you would call my name, it would stop the crying, stop the pain
Stop the self inflicted injuries, stop the blinding heartache
If only you could tell me how, much you love me so
Id me happy, rather sappy,
But happy, for a family

Copyright © crazygirl ... [ 2005-05-04 21:37:34]
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Re: Family (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:56:44 PM AEST
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wow gosh that is very... um... deep. i like it a lot, especially cuz i can sort of relate to it. but using the knife as a crutch will not help... trust me i know... i found it out the hard way. im healing... slowly... but its hard. life's hard, it gives us ****, but that we just have to learn to deal with. i built up an immunity to pain becuz its all i ever really felt. until you can release that pain that you hold inside and welcome happiness... you can succeed nothing. and in releasing pain, i do not mean thru your own blood. i mean talking about it or seeking some help or just writing about it even, like this in yer poems... its all helping you. i continue to send luv and hope and many hugs your way,
jennie*

Re: Family (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:40:15 PM AEST
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This is a sad poem! but it was good.

Re: Family (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 11:09:48 PM AEST
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This is really deep. I can relate to some of it.

Scott

Re: Family (User Rating: 1 )
by xAegisx on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:04:22 PM AEST
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this is a very sad write. i like it alot. i can relate to certain parts of it. but not all. ur family treats u badly. cutting is bad but i kno it "helps". ive been doing it for a while. but im starting to realize how bad it is.

Re: Family (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:38:02 AM AEST
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crazygirl---not

Every family has their fears problems and secrets--This makes life hard,but it can be overcomed.
This is an emotional poem and it is good to speak,write and share with others.
You will get through it and love for your family is there as I can feel it.
Hate what they do,but do love them and keep posting in time happiness will show in your writes.

Sinned

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