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Array ( [sid] => 93286 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What's Really Going On [time] => 2005-05-04 17:14:57 [hometext] => What I don't have the courage to tell my friends... [bodytext] => Beneath the willow I write
Out of mind, out of sight
I'm the girl you think you know
But I'll never let my true feelings show
For as long as you need me
There I will always be
Writing of my thoughts so deep
Hiding from you when I have to weep
This smile I paint on my face
Helps me hide my feelings of disgrace
When I'm helping make your problems gone
Yet I'll never tell you what's wrong
And for that I am ashamed
That I cannot share when i am pained
So every night I'll cry
Because I can't tell you I might die
And now I know what he went through
When he kept this same secret from me and you
Oh I wish I could make it all right
So I wouldn't have to say good-bye tonight
Take something to remember when I'm gone
Because this is what's really going on [comments] => 9 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

What's Really Going On

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 05:14:57 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Beneath the willow I write
Out of mind, out of sight
I'm the girl you think you know
But I'll never let my true feelings show
For as long as you need me
There I will always be
Writing of my thoughts so deep
Hiding from you when I have to weep
This smile I paint on my face
Helps me hide my feelings of disgrace
When I'm helping make your problems gone
Yet I'll never tell you what's wrong
And for that I am ashamed
That I cannot share when i am pained
So every night I'll cry
Because I can't tell you I might die
And now I know what he went through
When he kept this same secret from me and you
Oh I wish I could make it all right
So I wouldn't have to say good-bye tonight
Take something to remember when I'm gone
Because this is what's really going on

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-05-04 17:14:57]
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Re: What's Really Going On (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 05:53:32 PM AEST
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Great poem Kiela. *hugs* and this made me cry.

Re: What's Really Going On (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:11:04 PM AEST
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Sadness hides in the best of us and somehow we find a way to turn it into some one elses joy. Great write.

Re: What's Really Going On (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:20:36 PM AEST
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U have the courage, problem is the compassion gets in the way . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: What's Really Going On (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:07:35 PM AEST
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Interesting way to express whats bothering you or whats going on in your life. I like this poem.

Re: What's Really Going On (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:27:36 PM AEST
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WHAT THE ARE YOU SAYING? YOU'RE TOO GOOD TO THROW YOUR LIFE AWAY!! LOOK AT THE WORDS THAT COME FROM YOUR HEART,THEY'RE A REFLECTION OFF OF YOUR GOLDEN LITTLE HEART!!! YOUR EYES ARE OF DIMONDS BECAUSE THEY'RE FOREVER,& SO IS EVERYTHING ELSE ABOUT YOU ALTOGETHER!!!! IF YOU LEFT US NOW,THEN LOVE JUST WOULDN'T KNOW HOW,TO GO ON & BE SO STRONG,YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN KEEP IT GOING ON & MAKE IT LAST A LIFETIME LONG!!!!! I DON'T THINK YOU WANNA TAKE ALL THAT AWAY,BECAUSE YOU'RE A SPECIAL PERSON EACH & EVERY DAY!!!!!! nuff said!!!!!!!

Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!!!!

Re: What's Really Going On (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:02:30 AM AEST
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awww hugs kiela.
girly you ever need to talk.PM me ok.
dont do anything foolish.
awsome write

Re: What's Really Going On (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 10:42:51 AM AEST
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Dont keep these emotions locked inside. True friends will be there to listen and have a shoulder to cry on. Be you accept me for who I am..

A fabulous poem

Love Angelxxxxxx

Re: What's Really Going On (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 09:53:14 PM AEST
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This is a really great poem. Very sad, but really good. You know that you have your buddies on here if you ever need us! Chin up sweetie! Life gets better.

Carol

Re: What's Really Going On (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:42:12 PM AEST
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great write i can definitely relate to that! Tanya

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