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Array ( [sid] => 93248 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Those Haunting Eyes [time] => 2005-05-04 09:50:48 [hometext] => In truth, this began as a joke. In practice, it is a tribute of sorts. Just a poetic appreciation of a Lady with hauntingly exquisite eyes. To the Lady Jane a.k.a. Blowfish_Jane. P.S.Don't worry I am not a stalker....yet. [bodytext] => From the first I saw
those haunting eyes,
ever was I drawn
to their haunted stare.

Deeper and deeper
did I drown,
within their depths
of pooled eclairs.

Delicious pools
of ice-blue mien,
as cool breezes
sensual and sly.

Like a siren's song
a succubi's sigh,
seducing attention
from this mortal's eye. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Those Haunting Eyes

Contributed by Baronhawk on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:50:48 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

From the first I saw
those haunting eyes,
ever was I drawn
to their haunted stare.

Deeper and deeper
did I drown,
within their depths
of pooled eclairs.

Delicious pools
of ice-blue mien,
as cool breezes
sensual and sly.

Like a siren's song
a succubi's sigh,
seducing attention
from this mortal's eye.

Copyright © Baronhawk ... [ 2005-05-04 09:50:48]
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Re: Those Haunting Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:27:37 AM AEST
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wow---lucky Lady! Nice.

Re: Those Haunting Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:34:59 PM AEST
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wow nice.........

Re: Those Haunting Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:01:22 PM AEST
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I like it how lucky you are Jane:)
Michelle

Re: Those Haunting Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:11:40 PM AEST
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*Giggles*

Aww a poem for me, how sweet of you Baronhawk.
This was lovely and i'm blushing profusely LOL.

Hugs,
Jane

P.S. Thanks for the poem.

Re: Those Haunting Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:42:02 PM AEST
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Baronhawk,

A nice enjoyable read. I believe Jane is a beautiful lady both inside and out and is worthy of your tribute.
Good job.

Carol

Re: Those Haunting Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:17:18 AM AEST
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Very nice...succinct but a thoroughly worthwhile read. Lovely tribute to jane... :)

Re: Those Haunting Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 05:54:03 PM AEST
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*grins*

Lovely eyes, indeed, they are.

Good words, o Hawk. I like the alliteration. It being my own preferred ornament.

Andrew

Re: Those Haunting Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:30:33 AM AEST
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Baronhawk, that was simply lovely, romantic and alittle off-hand. I love your picture, now I understand..........you're handsome, young, and debenair! Oh Baronhawk..........how you do fare!
Enjoyed your great poem,
Warm love
consue

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