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What Is Real
Contributed by
Sonic_phoenix
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:49:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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painless is the burns on my arms
i cannot feel them or the harm
blister and meld my flesh to bone
i do not feel it though i am alone
to tired to feel the marks on my body
i have no feeling they are not hot to me
unaware to the bleeding sensatrion
no wraith to this great frustration
when will i feel this terrible pain
is that a loss or a premature gain
a will to kill to feel what is real
being killed to feel the real
What is Real?
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2005-05-04 08:49:33]
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Re: What Is Real
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:35:29 AM AEST
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isnt it true how the pain inside hurts more than the burnt flesh or open sore on your body? to everyone else it would be opposite
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Re: What Is Real
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:53:22 AM AEST
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| a very dark, graphic write that provokes thought. A very strong issue wrapped in a tight rhyming structure makes this poem great. keep up the good work. |
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Re: What Is Real
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by mexicomama33 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:46:01 PM AEST
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| great rhythem and wording. emotional piece I really enjoyed and can relate. |
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