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Array ( [sid] => 93220 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unexpected Change [time] => 2005-05-03 23:45:44 [hometext] => it just wasn't meant to be i guess... [bodytext] => It's hard when things don't go the way you expect them to,
especially when you thought it was so for sure.
It was nothing I did or didn't do,
now I'm left with all this pain to endure.

I really wish things would've worked out differently,
in my eyes we still belong together.
I know she didn't try and hurt me intently,
but once again, another storm for me to weather.

I'm usually for the most part pretty stress free,
but this really hits me hard.
I don't think anything much worse could happen to me,
my heart will be forever scarred.

I thought we had something going here,
but I guess she didn't feel the same.
I wonder if she even shed a tear,
as the gust of wind blew out our flame.

There isn't much hope for the two of us anymore,
I think it's pretty much coming to a close.
It might be time to just shut the door,
move on in life and see where it goes.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 22 [informant] => curtisc [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Unexpected Change

Contributed by curtisc on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 11:45:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



It's hard when things don't go the way you expect them to,
especially when you thought it was so for sure.
It was nothing I did or didn't do,
now I'm left with all this pain to endure.

I really wish things would've worked out differently,
in my eyes we still belong together.
I know she didn't try and hurt me intently,
but once again, another storm for me to weather.

I'm usually for the most part pretty stress free,
but this really hits me hard.
I don't think anything much worse could happen to me,
my heart will be forever scarred.

I thought we had something going here,
but I guess she didn't feel the same.
I wonder if she even shed a tear,
as the gust of wind blew out our flame.

There isn't much hope for the two of us anymore,
I think it's pretty much coming to a close.
It might be time to just shut the door,
move on in life and see where it goes.




Copyright © curtisc ... [ 2005-05-03 23:45:44]
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Re: Unexpected Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:55:16 AM AEST
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Great poem. I am sad for your loss out of it has come an apt write. I hope things work out for you when new love comes


Re: Unexpected Change (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 05:02:45 AM AEST
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nice write curtis keep the faith my friend if it's meant 2 be it will happen . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: Unexpected Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:42:24 PM AEST
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awww so sad ..
well done


Re: Unexpected Change (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:17:09 AM AEST
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I agree with Ben...things happen, or don't happen for a reason. I really liked the 2nd to the last verse. Great write. Tanya




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