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Array ( [sid] => 93187 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A ***** [time] => 2005-05-03 19:53:48 [hometext] => im sick of trying to compete with her... [bodytext] => pretending to be so happy
smiling and blowing off the rest of the world
as if i couldn't care
i suppose she was right

i really have been quite the *****
even though my baby says no
i see it, i guess
the lies, the jokes, the late night cries

i wake up to the screams
the youth within
screaming for relief
sighs escape the motionless body

the youth has escaped
the lifeless *****
the one that doesn't care
the one you hate with all your might

i will no longer be pushed around
a *****, if i must
already it seems

you declared the battle
but i'm declaring the war
you pushed my limits
you struke [comments] => 6 [counter] => 1115 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shrunkin_fool34142316 [notes] => Edited for Language by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

A *****

Contributed by shrunkin_fool34142316 on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 07:53:48 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

pretending to be so happy
smiling and blowing off the rest of the world
as if i couldn't care
i suppose she was right

i really have been quite the *****
even though my baby says no
i see it, i guess
the lies, the jokes, the late night cries

i wake up to the screams
the youth within
screaming for relief
sighs escape the motionless body

the youth has escaped
the lifeless *****
the one that doesn't care
the one you hate with all your might

i will no longer be pushed around
a *****, if i must
already it seems

you declared the battle
but i'm declaring the war
you pushed my limits
you struke

Copyright © shrunkin_fool34142316 ... [ 2005-05-03 19:53:48]
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Re: A ***** (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:10:40 PM AEST
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good poem...the ***** within

Re: A ***** (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:26:51 PM AEST
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someone really messed with your head...good writes.

Re: A ***** (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 09:19:37 PM AEST
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wow... amazing i can totally relate to this.
keep up the good werk and ill keep reading.
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: A ***** (User Rating: 1 )
by libra on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 09:40:45 PM AEST
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We all have a ***** within ourselves.
thank u 4 the cool poetry about the person who talks to us at night.

Re: A ***** (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:50:53 PM AEST
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I HOPE I NEVER GET YOU MAD! A GREAT POEM ABOUT INNER THOUGHTS & ALL THE DEMONS THAT ARE CAUGHT!! ROCK ON-& MOST OF ALL.....TRY & SMILE!!!

DAN!!!!

Re: A ***** (User Rating: 1 )
by FlirtQueen on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:02:46 PM AEST
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that was such a deep poem, i know how you feel good job

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