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Array ( [sid] => 93182 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mom [time] => 2005-05-03 18:56:37 [hometext] => Ok this is about my mom and im not quite sure i should share this with the world but i am so...i dont know comment if you want( i think its kind of stupid) [bodytext] => Why am i so lost? Why am i so stupid?
Why do i lie to make it all better? Why do i lie at all?
Why do i love this abusive Woman, who always finds ways to hurt me?
Why cant she let me be? Why cant she be what a moms supposed to be?
Why dose she always call me a slut? Why dose she hate me? What did i do?
I didnt kill my baby brother, either did you..?
Why do i hurt for her insecurities? Why do i belive all she says?
Why do i cry night after night, always hating myself more?
Why do i hate life? Why to i fight? Why do i scream with all my might?
Why do i feel like i have no reason?
Why must all my loved ones leave me? Why do i bother going on, you say?
ALL BECAUSE OF HIM. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 6 [informant] => crazygirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Mom

Contributed by crazygirl on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:56:37 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Why am i so lost? Why am i so stupid?
Why do i lie to make it all better? Why do i lie at all?
Why do i love this abusive Woman, who always finds ways to hurt me?
Why cant she let me be? Why cant she be what a moms supposed to be?
Why dose she always call me a slut? Why dose she hate me? What did i do?
I didnt kill my baby brother, either did you..?
Why do i hurt for her insecurities? Why do i belive all she says?
Why do i cry night after night, always hating myself more?
Why do i hate life? Why to i fight? Why do i scream with all my might?
Why do i feel like i have no reason?
Why must all my loved ones leave me? Why do i bother going on, you say?
ALL BECAUSE OF HIM.

Copyright © crazygirl ... [ 2005-05-03 18:56:37]
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Re: Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:00:35 PM AEST
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wow, that was full of great emotion and passion... so much hate and guilt that is there. im so sorry you have to go through this. if you ever need to talk, you can pm me anytime. i rilly like this kind of writing, keep up the good work.
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:22:59 PM AEST
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hate and passion....awsome poem....here if u need to talk or vent or something...kc

Re: Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by mexicomama33 on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:53:51 PM AEST
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i really liked your poem. its raw emotional truth. I've been told writing is very theraputic it helps me. Your feelings and emotions are displayed beautifully in your words.

Re: Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 11:03:36 PM AEST
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I can feel the pain you are going through, I have been really close to a situation like that. I am sorry that you are going through this.

Scott

Re: Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by xAegisx on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:00:21 PM AEST
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awwww. this a very sad write. my mother and i dont get along. but its not that bad. im sorry u have troubles with ur family.

Re: Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:49:19 PM AEST
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