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Array ( [sid] => 93159 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She is so Cold [time] => 2005-05-03 15:05:14 [hometext] => me and my mom have been fighting again and this is kinda a vision that played over in my head [bodytext] => stab a razor blade in my leg
the blood flows and soaks my jeans
my hands are trmbling
my circulation constricts
the room is covered in ice
she is so cold
i wonder if she truely cares
does she love me unconditionally
or is that yet another lie
she is only annoyed as i cry
she has no sympathy
when i feel pain she takes no care
to her i am a parasite
a mistake in Gods plan
God makes no mistakes
she just refuses to learn
she sees herself as earths icy sun
she is so cold
now the razor is in my arm
god i love to see the blood flow
now shes screaming
911 on the phone
i guess thats what it takes to get her attention
now finally i have her love [comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 13 [informant] => brokensoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
She is so Cold

Contributed by brokensoul on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 03:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



stab a razor blade in my leg
the blood flows and soaks my jeans
my hands are trmbling
my circulation constricts
the room is covered in ice
she is so cold
i wonder if she truely cares
does she love me unconditionally
or is that yet another lie
she is only annoyed as i cry
she has no sympathy
when i feel pain she takes no care
to her i am a parasite
a mistake in Gods plan
God makes no mistakes
she just refuses to learn
she sees herself as earths icy sun
she is so cold
now the razor is in my arm
god i love to see the blood flow
now shes screaming
911 on the phone
i guess thats what it takes to get her attention
now finally i have her love




Copyright © brokensoul ... [ 2005-05-03 15:05:14]
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Re: She is so Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 02:37:41 PM AEST
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i know the feeling
me and my mom fight all the time
Great portayal of pain
keep it up!




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