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[aid] => mick
[title] => You Will Find Me
[time] => 2005-05-03 12:08:54
[hometext] => Lay dying in your arms...
[bodytext] => Lay down dying in your arms,
I apologise for causing you harm,
All I ever wanted to do,
Was to make you smile, I wanted to love you.
But I trampled all over our love,
I choked our beautiful, white dove,
I spat in the face of your desire,
I made you walk across my razor wire.
My sorries echo in your room,
The space I filled with hate & gloom,
Your heart now a place where darkness lies,
I don’t deserve forgiving as I sit here & cry.
All we had & all I destroyed,
I treated you bad, just like my toy,
I always thought you would come back,
But you didn’t & gave our love the sack.
I killed your soul, I killed it dead,
I messed with your emotions & your head,
You will find me lay here dead in your arms,
I am sorry my love that I caused you harm.
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[counter] => 525
[topic] => 48
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
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You Will Find Me
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:08:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lay down dying in your arms,
I apologise for causing you harm,
All I ever wanted to do,
Was to make you smile, I wanted to love you.
But I trampled all over our love,
I choked our beautiful, white dove,
I spat in the face of your desire,
I made you walk across my razor wire.
My sorries echo in your room,
The space I filled with hate & gloom,
Your heart now a place where darkness lies,
I don’t deserve forgiving as I sit here & cry.
All we had & all I destroyed,
I treated you bad, just like my toy,
I always thought you would come back,
But you didn’t & gave our love the sack.
I killed your soul, I killed it dead,
I messed with your emotions & your head,
You will find me lay here dead in your arms,
I am sorry my love that I caused you harm.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-05-03 12:08:54]
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by charmed_socks on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:16:15 PM AEST
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| very nice... emotional... i really like this |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:23:52 PM AEST
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| Very emotional. Good poem. |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:52:38 PM AEST
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such feeling Krisse!
wonderfully expressed, if not wanted inspiration. |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by bethie on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 01:06:27 PM AEST
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| Don't be so hard on yourself. Life is life. It is not easy. |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:46:01 PM AEST
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| Very good write. Your words paint a picture of sorrow and missing. |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 03:18:13 PM AEST
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| This was a sad write but also very powerful. I to have destroyed a love once in my life and lost it forever so I feel the pain. But you wrote of it so beautifully and it had a very strong ending which makes it a really good write. Take care and as always I look forward to more writes….Steve |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 03:23:03 PM AEST
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Such an emotive write, couldn't be writen anymore perfectly.
Nice write Krissie.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 04:04:12 PM AEST
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Oh Pixie....this is so sad and emotional... I have to agree with Bethie tho...don't be so hard on yourself..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:05:37 AM AEST
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A sullen but rather beautiful peice of poetry as
always, time will enlighten, as well as heal . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:47:39 AM AEST
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This is so sad. Do not be to hard on yourself Pixie.
Many more HUGS for you
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:46:44 AM AEST
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Firstly this is another great one, it shows the hurt you are feeling well.
Secondly I hate to think of you hurting so much, and...
Thirdly...
Life will always turn out well for somebody who obviously loves with a passion such as yours.
You just gotta hang on in there...
Johnny. |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:34:50 AM AEST
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Hope the best for you.
--Ghosty |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:58:29 PM AEST
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Well written poem of love lost. Sad, but an admiral quality of an estranged lover who treated their lover badly; but at least is teking responsability for their poor behavior. No blaming.... I like that
Well done
Will |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 09:52:52 PM AEST
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genuine and heartfelt, big hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: You Will Find Me
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by venkat on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 05:17:07 AM AEST
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| Ooh..pixie..it is a sad thing.. and you are emotional. I hope every thing will be alright soon. God bless :-) venkat |
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