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Array ( [sid] => 93140 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Spider Nest [time] => 2005-05-03 10:37:49 [hometext] => I was paralized [bodytext] => It had been raining for days
Finger lightning on display
Frighting residents of the southwest Florida coast
Most older of course

Retiries living in condominians
I'm a matainance man come down from Michigan
I used to live on the Thumb
Unemployment is why I come

Every morning we get these storms
By afternoon its way too warm
I work with another man
He is younger and goes by Den

Pay in Florida is way too low
Our work is easy and normally slow
Most days we have time to scout the beach
The young prettry girls are mostly out of reach

Nice to look at though
String bikinies and braws so low
On the side Den and I are gigalos
The money is good if you don't mind your loving old

Widows pay well for the service
Lonesome and in need many turn to this old vice
Hey You gotta make a living
Besides Den and I believe in giving

After these morning rains it always gets warm
Then nasty are the insects that swarm
Biting both man and beast
Then the spiders come to feast

I have never never liked spiders
Just the thought and I shudder
Big and black with beady eyes
Running pouncing on the sand catching flies

Spiders are more animial than insect
The make me cringe and I almost feel sick
The way they eat their prey
The way they poison it to save it for another day

Dennis and I just recived a call
There's a water leak at condaminian four
Damn There goes our day on the beach
Bye Bye bikinies and sun taned cheeks

At the condaminian we had to shut the water off at the street
Water was running at our feet
Damn We had a job on our hand

There was a broken main right in the basement
We would have to brake through the cement
This would take a day to complete
Den and I got our work sheet

Bottled water was given to the residents
Complaints were percistant
We pumped out the water to enter in
The basement was filled with wet sand


Where the main was there is a big hole
Sand piled as if by a giganic mole
I walked over to get a look inside
I saw what looked like two huge beady eyes

I leaned over for a closer look
Spooked
I ask Den for the high power flashlight
Imeaditaly I was filled with terrifying fright

In the sand I tried to climb
Crawing with every limb
The sand kept drawing me down
I took a thousand steps and not took one

Dennis looked down then he ran
Help me help me Den den den
He couldn't hear
No longer near


I could see the spider as big as a car
Goddang creepy crawler
The more tried
The more I realized

In this sand trap I could't escape
Looking down I could see the spider wait
God I don't want to get ate
Light from the basement began to disipate

The more I cried the more muffeled the sound
This sand was pulling me underground
I was in the spiders den
Terrified not merly frighten

Baby spiders by the thousand
Tunnels all over in the sand
Big enough for a volkswagon
Everywhere skelton bones of man

Momma spider sat on me and stung
I was paralized and she wrapped me in a cacoon
I couldn't move but I could see
Realizing they would eat me

Paralized
I couldn't even cry
Gnawing fear
Dinner how near

It must have been much over a week
Wraped like a butchers meat
Momma spider speaks with rhymatic humm
Up above I hear them filling this tunnel in

Two young spiders push one another like one on a mirror
My fear is shear
What is keeping me alive
Do spiders need fresh meat to surive

Wait wait Momma spider is unwraping me
Their going to feast
I'm free
I try to flea

Its no use
To her leg I'm stuck by goo
Agggh she tore off an arm
Babies swarm

The more I bleed the more that come
With her jagged jaws she snaps off my other arm
I'm terrified
I see momma's eyes

Looking at me with eyes that shine
As bright as a train on a railroad line
Her jaw snaps off a leg
I lay there and bleed

Her eyes shine on me
I can hardly see
Her jaunty jaw is coming at my head
Crunching cracking a final snap and I'm dead

Sinned
































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Spider Nest

Contributed by sinned on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:37:49 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



It had been raining for days
Finger lightning on display
Frighting residents of the southwest Florida coast
Most older of course

Retiries living in condominians
I'm a matainance man come down from Michigan
I used to live on the Thumb
Unemployment is why I come

Every morning we get these storms
By afternoon its way too warm
I work with another man
He is younger and goes by Den

Pay in Florida is way too low
Our work is easy and normally slow
Most days we have time to scout the beach
The young prettry girls are mostly out of reach

Nice to look at though
String bikinies and braws so low
On the side Den and I are gigalos
The money is good if you don't mind your loving old

Widows pay well for the service
Lonesome and in need many turn to this old vice
Hey You gotta make a living
Besides Den and I believe in giving

After these morning rains it always gets warm
Then nasty are the insects that swarm
Biting both man and beast
Then the spiders come to feast

I have never never liked spiders
Just the thought and I shudder
Big and black with beady eyes
Running pouncing on the sand catching flies

Spiders are more animial than insect
The make me cringe and I almost feel sick
The way they eat their prey
The way they poison it to save it for another day

Dennis and I just recived a call
There's a water leak at condaminian four
Damn There goes our day on the beach
Bye Bye bikinies and sun taned cheeks

At the condaminian we had to shut the water off at the street
Water was running at our feet
Damn We had a job on our hand

There was a broken main right in the basement
We would have to brake through the cement
This would take a day to complete
Den and I got our work sheet

Bottled water was given to the residents
Complaints were percistant
We pumped out the water to enter in
The basement was filled with wet sand


Where the main was there is a big hole
Sand piled as if by a giganic mole
I walked over to get a look inside
I saw what looked like two huge beady eyes

I leaned over for a closer look
Spooked
I ask Den for the high power flashlight
Imeaditaly I was filled with terrifying fright

In the sand I tried to climb
Crawing with every limb
The sand kept drawing me down
I took a thousand steps and not took one

Dennis looked down then he ran
Help me help me Den den den
He couldn't hear
No longer near


I could see the spider as big as a car
Goddang creepy crawler
The more tried
The more I realized

In this sand trap I could't escape
Looking down I could see the spider wait
God I don't want to get ate
Light from the basement began to disipate

The more I cried the more muffeled the sound
This sand was pulling me underground
I was in the spiders den
Terrified not merly frighten

Baby spiders by the thousand
Tunnels all over in the sand
Big enough for a volkswagon
Everywhere skelton bones of man

Momma spider sat on me and stung
I was paralized and she wrapped me in a cacoon
I couldn't move but I could see
Realizing they would eat me

Paralized
I couldn't even cry
Gnawing fear
Dinner how near

It must have been much over a week
Wraped like a butchers meat
Momma spider speaks with rhymatic humm
Up above I hear them filling this tunnel in

Two young spiders push one another like one on a mirror
My fear is shear
What is keeping me alive
Do spiders need fresh meat to surive

Wait wait Momma spider is unwraping me
Their going to feast
I'm free
I try to flea

Its no use
To her leg I'm stuck by goo
Agggh she tore off an arm
Babies swarm

The more I bleed the more that come
With her jagged jaws she snaps off my other arm
I'm terrified
I see momma's eyes

Looking at me with eyes that shine
As bright as a train on a railroad line
Her jaw snaps off a leg
I lay there and bleed

Her eyes shine on me
I can hardly see
Her jaunty jaw is coming at my head
Crunching cracking a final snap and I'm dead

Sinned




































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Re: Spider Nest (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:42:31 AM AEST
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your writes just keep progressing into more and more interesting pieces of work. i really liked this one... a little long but it tells a great story.
jennie*


Re: Spider Nest (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:07:59 AM AEST
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definently a big tale.
spiders, huh?
good writing.
huggs,
emy


Re: Spider Nest (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:31:02 AM AEST
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A truly fascinating story this Denis.
I never experienced spiders of the kind you describe here. cannot even imagine their size, - perhaps only in Florida - but I tell you that that a kind lady helped me to eliminate spiders from the computer,- and believe it or not - cockroaches.
Kind of her.
But your sotry is indeed fascinating.
Thanks for offering it.
Blessings
Elizabeth




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