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Array ( [sid] => 93139 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Way Ticket [time] => 2005-05-03 10:29:25 [hometext] => to the headaches that never end... i raise these pills to them [bodytext] => this headache i feel in my head
pulses pain through every day
i overdose and close my eyes
but it will not go away
the feeling overpowers me
until it's all i feel
increasing and defeating
until my life it will steal
pouning against my walls
exploding ache inside
from this infinite and boundless pain
i cannot run or hide
it does not stop, it does not settle
it takes over my life
controled by this endless thrash
it takes hold of my strife
in my hand i hold the pills
i take them one by one
until the bottle lay there empty
my time here is done
the headache fades as do i
everything goes black
my one way ticket has arrived
now there's no going back [comments] => 3 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 36 [informant] => blue_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

One Way Ticket

Contributed by blue_angel on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:29:25 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

this headache i feel in my head
pulses pain through every day
i overdose and close my eyes
but it will not go away
the feeling overpowers me
until it's all i feel
increasing and defeating
until my life it will steal
pouning against my walls
exploding ache inside
from this infinite and boundless pain
i cannot run or hide
it does not stop, it does not settle
it takes over my life
controled by this endless thrash
it takes hold of my strife
in my hand i hold the pills
i take them one by one
until the bottle lay there empty
my time here is done
the headache fades as do i
everything goes black
my one way ticket has arrived
now there's no going back

Copyright Â© blue_angel ... [ 2005-05-03 10:29:25]
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Re: One Way Ticket (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:53:20 PM AEST
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I can totally relate to where you're coming from...powerful write.

Re: One Way Ticket (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:46:41 PM AEST
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This is a good write and it flows through the story very well. Take care and I look forward to more good writes…..Steve

Re: One Way Ticket (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 09:59:02 PM AEST
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when i was a sophomore, i had a long talk with a bottle of aspirin and how i was going to take the 30 or so that were left in the bottle. i can understand how you felt in as much that i had the same desire (though not sure what pills you had/have). i didn't do it then (well, obviously) and i didn't know why then - maybe i wanted to die but not suffer, and death by OD didn't sound like the most comfortable way to go... but maybe fate? I dunno if there is such a thing as predestination and all acts of freewill are just illusions in a script already penned, but if there is a reason i am here in this here and now, let it be for me to have you not go. Yes, I do not live your life and it probably comes across as selfish to ask, and while I cannot speak for others (although I know many would echo this sentiment) the loss of your life would be so devastating.

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