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[sid] => 9313
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => love condemns
[time] => 2002-12-27 14:00:00
[hometext] => "This poem is as true to what happend to me as i could make it" ( the rhyming scheme is abcd abcd and continues that way )
[bodytext] => I’m trying not to love her
For loving her is a betrayal to myself But trying not to love her is a betrayal to my heart She never returned the love which I gave to her so freely But now as I look into her beautiful face I feel so unsure Will she hurt me again will more sadness be felt? Why can’t she see she’s tearing me apart Why doesn’t she appreciate my love why doesn’t she appreciate me? I look into her eyes and I’m so afraid And when she speaks I know things haven’t changed She still doesn’t love me She still doesn’t understand how much I feel I give up and my heart recedes into the shade Now love seems so foolish so deranged She has my heart. Without it who am I supposed to be? Will these scars ever heal? As she walks away she says goodbye And then she leaves me so very carelessly I can’t hold myself together I stand there watching her go The tears form behind my eyes She is what I will never have and yet she is what I will always need I wish I could have held her But her affection I will never know She is gone and she continues without a thought of me Would she care more if she knew how much I’ve wept Would she care more if she knew of my despair Does she know how pointless life is without her tenderness I’m so alone the whole world must agree I lay awake... It has been so long since I've slept All this anguish I cannot bear All I ever wanted was her love... her kiss She has hurt me such a great deal Maybe if I could just see her cry If I could just see her feel something Maybe then my anguish would fade But she’s so happy and joy is all she seems to feel Meanwhile I suffer and I feel like I should die Yet she carries on without a remorseful feeling I can no longer keep my anguish at bay Now I cry all the time And she doesn’t notice or she doesn’t seem to care She has shown me no sympathy no compassion And I still can’t seem to let go Thoughts of her still pass through my mind But what good is love if it can’t be shared? O why did all this happen? I could try to hide my agony, but it would still show O please show me some kind of understanding I don’t know if I can take this anymore Show me my love isn’t a hopeless delusion Show me a reason to carry on I can’t stand this it’s all to saddening I’ll try to walk away and on love I'll shut the door And amidst all this misery and confusion I hope I’ll find a reason to wake up even though all my love is gone [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 2 [informant] => philly [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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