|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Array
(
[sid] => 93080
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Good Friends
[time] => 2005-05-02 19:30:12
[hometext] => Most of my poetry is dark and cynical, but alas, even hauntedscorp's have carefree days!
[bodytext] => You're special to me, you're someone I trust
I treasure the topics that we have discussed
I'm thankful for times you have summoned a smile
I'm grateful our paths have converged for a while
I'm pleased by each confidence you have displayed
I cherish those moments you've sought to persuade
I'm touched by the gestures of kindness you've shown
I've noticed how fast all our hours have flown
I'm feeling the force of a friendship that's true
I'm fortunate knowing a person like you.
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 394
[topic] => 16
[informant] => hauntedscorp
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 56
[ratings] => 12
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => FriendshipPoetry
)
Good Friends
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:30:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
|
You're special to me, you're someone I trust
I treasure the topics that we have discussed
I'm thankful for times you have summoned a smile
I'm grateful our paths have converged for a while
I'm pleased by each confidence you have displayed
I cherish those moments you've sought to persuade
I'm touched by the gestures of kindness you've shown
I've noticed how fast all our hours have flown
I'm feeling the force of a friendship that's true
I'm fortunate knowing a person like you.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
... [
2005-05-02 19:30:12]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:24:22 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very nice ...A friendship is nice to have . |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:48:11 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Friendship sounds like a wonderful thing to have. I only have two friends, my boyfriend and his sister. I liked this. Very well written |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:41:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
oh jeez. this was good, it really was. and have I ever been in this situation! the words you chose to describe the situation were quite impressive, it falls in line with the exact same way I feel all the time with a certain relationship or two that I have. the best line in this one, to me, would have to be:
I'm grateful our paths have converged for a while
Which I've tried to express myself dozens of times, but improperly. You captured it so well here, and you payed attention to rhyme scheme and iambic flow! I rarely ever see that, and it's always a pleasure to read. Nicely done, yet again. |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:41:01 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I really like this ... carefree indeed ... and wonderfully penned. True friends are a treasure worth so much more than we will ever know ... and they are few and far between for some of us. Thankfully ... I have at least one ... ( quite possibly more that I may be unaware of )
Nazzy ~ |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by kylie on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 04:24:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| wow... i like. this is good. and i am not just saying that bc you leave me nice comments. i think you did an excellent job!!!! |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:14:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I love it. |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 05:31:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
hey,
this is really beautiful!! 1of my faves, coz its so happy!!! a change from my norm 2!!! but im happy now so its good 2 read happy stuf!! ill stop blabberin now!! its awsum, keep it up!!
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:05:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is a good feeling, uplifting and great great great GREAT dedication to friendship.
Kie |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 11:42:43 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| ::rather likes your noncarefree days:: lol. i must say scorp you are the fastest improving writer ive ever seen. ::feels like such a slow progresser:: =] |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:19:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very sweet, personal poem of friendship, I enjoyed reading it, it is always a good fortune to have that best friend:>
_________________________________________
"Wake me up only if it is true, otherwise, allow me to stay in my dream, says Meagan!" |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th August 2010 @ 12:17:36 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
   
Gone back in time a few years. It's good to be back.  |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th January 2013 @ 09:13:40 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| (((((((((( SCORP )))))))))) |
|
|
Re: Good Friends
(User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 14th December 2016 @ 09:43:20 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Nothing better than this to share with a special friend! Wonderful write!
James |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
