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Array ( [sid] => 93076 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Manic Teenage Suicide [time] => 2005-05-02 19:23:20 [hometext] => not about me...my imagination was working on another typical teens feelings...comments appreciated [bodytext] => Deep blue rushing rivers of tears flow through
The core of my little broken heart
Through the middle the pain does spill out
Onto my notebook of scribbled "I Hate You's"
And "Love Me Nots"
Another teenage broken heart
And sliced red crimson wrists
Of lovely suicide
The blood does flow from my eyes
Into my soul as he slowly died in my arms of an overdose
I lay in the sand and cry
The beach breeze air brushes upon my face and I jump into the ocean
To drown in the waves of another
Depressed seventeen year old girl
Who could'nt handle the lies,pressure,drugs,sex
And life
Typically,SATISTICALLY
This girl is another teenage manic depressive
Who no one dared to give another look
Through her bright smile and preppy clothes...
She drowns in her tears of sorrows.
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Manic Teenage Suicide

Contributed by Alina on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:23:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Deep blue rushing rivers of tears flow through
The core of my little broken heart
Through the middle the pain does spill out
Onto my notebook of scribbled "I Hate You's"
And "Love Me Nots"
Another teenage broken heart
And sliced red crimson wrists
Of lovely suicide
The blood does flow from my eyes
Into my soul as he slowly died in my arms of an overdose
I lay in the sand and cry
The beach breeze air brushes upon my face and I jump into the ocean
To drown in the waves of another
Depressed seventeen year old girl
Who could'nt handle the lies,pressure,drugs,sex
And life
Typically,SATISTICALLY
This girl is another teenage manic depressive
Who no one dared to give another look
Through her bright smile and preppy clothes...
She drowns in her tears of sorrows.

Copyright © Alina ... [ 2005-05-02 19:23:20]
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Re: Manic Teenage Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:45:05 PM AEST
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sometimes its just easier to hide it from others than u dont have to deal with it all the time, you can hide behind covers of "preppines"

Re: Manic Teenage Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:46:35 PM AEST
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You did a good job with this poem.

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