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Longing feelings haunt me, the same way they do you
you used to make me laugh and smile
now every word you speak is vile; you never make me smile......
you used to be so sweet and understanding
now you care of nothing else but you,
now you dont seem to understand me at all
You've changed; so have i
Me for the better, you for the worst
Yet i still find myself loving you......
Your so concited and full of yourself
Stuck inside your own world
You say you've found another love, who loves you for you
But thats not true......
I loved you when nobody would
I thought you were somebody when you thought you were nobody
She never acknowledged you until i broke your heart
making it cold and uninviting
Making it perfect for her...... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => crazygirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Pain- Recognized

Contributed by crazygirl on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:28:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Painfull memories, i know i have them too
Longing feelings haunt me, the same way they do you
you used to make me laugh and smile
now every word you speak is vile; you never make me smile......
you used to be so sweet and understanding
now you care of nothing else but you,
now you dont seem to understand me at all
You've changed; so have i
Me for the better, you for the worst
Yet i still find myself loving you......
Your so concited and full of yourself
Stuck inside your own world
You say you've found another love, who loves you for you
But thats not true......
I loved you when nobody would
I thought you were somebody when you thought you were nobody
She never acknowledged you until i broke your heart
making it cold and uninviting
Making it perfect for her......

Copyright © crazygirl ... [ 2005-05-02 18:28:31]
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Re: Pain- Recognized (User Rating: 1 )
by tin on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:23:02 PM AEST
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it amazes me how drasticly yet subtly we are all changed by relationships and such. i think back to how i was before i got my first girlfriend, so many things have changed: intrests, needs, desires, and the like. but no one ever seems to realise how much they've changed untill much later. but it's not necessarily bad, just think of how different your life would be if you hadn't(or had) changed. i know that if i hadn't been changed by my past relationships i probably would never have met, let alone be with my curent girlfriend(who i'm 741% sure is the best thing to come into my life in a long time). even if the changes don't seem to be so great just give it time, life's not all bad good things are bound to happen. but all that aside, i'd like to say that this is a great write. thanks for sharing with us.

Re: Pain- Recognized (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 10:54:58 PM AEST
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The last couple of lines are really strong. Good things will happen eventually. They do.

Scott

Re: Pain- Recognized (User Rating: 1 )
by xAegisx on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 07:56:04 PM AEST
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meh. wow good write. very depressing but good. i can relate to this a lot. i will admit that this one is makin me cry

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